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Pearl of a poem
wow, blue, I liked this poem. Perfect poetry in my book. I loved the flow and the topic, nite nite tales
Impressive
I am not usually fond of rhyming poems. Too often, they feel forced or contrived. But this one rolls off the tongue like a lifesaver candy. Deliciously.
;)
Great Job Blue... you know how I like my Rhymes!
;)
this was fantastic!
kisses...
~LB~
slamming it home......
that is for sure. very fluid like the ink dripped out of then on its own. nicely done.....don
like it
I gave it a five because there is no 4.75. The last
verse is good but the rest fit like hungies and beer.
'I'll be the quill'. So shoot me. sand
~~
Playing catch-up
On a week's words I've missed
This one's a real gem
And so unlike your usual style
But still a real find.
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