homeNon-Erotic PoetryA Childs SongPublic Comments

All Comments  for

A Childs Song

byAlexis661©
All
Comments (4)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by My Erotic Trail03/15/06

the joy

of little angels

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz12/11/06

~~

A totally fun piece of a day in the life of any child
Playing fun games to the last possible second
Then ending the day while awaiting another.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by duddle14612/15/06

Refreshing.

The Angels must be singing to see a child this happy. A delightful read filled with happy images that make you glad you discovered this hidden poetic Gem.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31706/09/12

CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS USE CHILDS PLAY

until the teens arrive. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to A Childs Song  or
More submissions by Alexis661.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel