All Comments  for

Who's There?

byMany Feathers©
All
Comments (41)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/18/06

Married to a Slut.

I guess if a wimp wants to be married to a slut,and let other men or woman have her,then let him get SID's and die if he wants to.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Many Feathers03/18/06

LOL...

And you come here to read these stories why? Too funny...

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by football_stud03/18/06

very hott

i really enjoyed the story and hope more chapters are to come and maybe he fucks the mysterious girl the next time. thanks again

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by DiJiT03/18/06

A+ all the way

Not sure what they were talking about, but I always enjoy it when a new story comes along from you.

Too bad they won't let me give more than a 5.

Keep 'em coming Feathery dude

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/18/06

Too many of these

By that I mean too many "Hey, let's blindfold the husband so he remains clueless but the wife gets to know everything" stories. No matter how people try, the are the same exact story, only the names change.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/18/06

Bullshit

Who is the sick asshole that posted this piss-poor trash?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Oral Rex03/19/06

The point of comments?

I'm dismayed at two of the comments this story received, so I "reported" them, for whatever that's worth. Flames directed at the author, as opposed to criticisms of the story, are contrary to what I value in this site.

IMHO, the story was very good, but not one of the author's best. But, I love that he writes them, because there are some gems here.

Now, I guess my stories will be flamed and lose their "Hot" ratings.

Going down...in flames.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by AnnaVenus6903/19/06

yummie

deliciously naughty, very arousing bedtime story... hmmmmm....more? All my Love xxx Anna

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/19/06

Read This

On Stories on line, I wonder why the nuts come a erotic story sites anyway. It looks like you only come here to bitch. To me it was a good story. But then I like loving wife stories. I like the one were the hurt party gets his revenge. The nastier the revenge the better. I read this story and like it.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by rlg9903/19/06

Liked It

I enjoyed reading this story. Keep Writing
Bob

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by MaverickMan03/19/06

Great story

This was a great story. You write so much good stuff. Too bad some jerks have nothing better to do than flame for no reason and do it anonymously. Chickens and idiots. Not brave enough to attach their name to their crap.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by bearlee03/19/06

Interesting story

Fascinating little piece-a little different. It seems once again the folks that don't care for this category but seem to keep coming-either to slam without reading or read and slam anyway are still around. To the moron that said it was the same old stuff and different names, I'm thinking you didn't read it. To the asshole that talks about dying of SIDS, I know you not didn't read it but don't know SIDS is Sudden Infant Death Syndrome-a horrible way for a life to end about 2 months of age and devastating to parents, family and friends of the baby and/or baby's family.

So Many Feathers, nice job on this one. I'm not sure about one reader's suggestion of more chapters, although it could be done no doubt-but I think you nailed it with this one!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by hongluobo03/20/06

strange flames

once again another entertaining story feathery dude, an enticing little fantasy to say the least!! Had the de-rigour twist in it that seems to be your trademark, though this one lacked the humor of others. A good read as always.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sybilrose03/20/06

Again your imagination is superb

Just for the record I think the dumb ass meant STD's not SID's *rolls eyes*

Loved the story Baby and look forward to the next and the next and...

Keep us cummin


syb

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by David Lockley03/21/06

You can take it to the bank.........

an MF classic. Your a favorite around here. A quaranteed early morning office "woodie", brings out the blush and giggles from the girls.. Wink Wink
Thanks again Buddy.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/27/06

Pretty Good

All I can say is...Wow that was pretty good...hope there is chapter two to this as Miranda seems to be really wanting to let loose even more but yet be the wonderful loving wife.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous09/19/06

master MF

You are the MASTER, u have proved it in all your stories.thanks.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by bruce2201/20/09

An Excellent Erotic Story

A very fine piece that I did not comment on when I read it the first time. I wonder if it was republished today if it would get a lot more negative comments than it got at the time. It is beautifully detailed and arousing but as one of the first commentator pointed out in an extreme manner is how does he know that the second woman is "safe" enough to lick? No problem, he believes that his wife would not harm him....
but that should bring some other commentators out of the woodwork to complain that his wife is getting it on with another woman! I admit that I would have probably lost my erection as the details appeared, but I am not the author and the protagonist does not have to have similar emotional reactions to me, or even to the author!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by jasonnh06/30/09

Great story

Very erotic story. But I have to ask, if the husband had a secret of some kind would the wife be willing to just let him keep it? I'll bet not.
Secrets in setting up a surprise are OK and add to the fun. But once the fun is over secrets are a form of control over the person kept in the dark. I know something you don't. Sorry, that's not my cup of tea.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous07/14/09

good story

I loved this but as for myself, I'm to much of a control freak I'd prefer it to never happen, than to be restrained and blindfolded, I designed my house so the wife can't hide under darkness, with the skyline window you can always see unless the power is completely out, as I mounted a security light that gives some light on the darkest of nights. But I have one ace in the hole as their is a security camera trained on the wall safe hidden abobe the head board of our bed that would allow me to know anyway. This is a feature that I added when I built the house, before I even met the wife. They loop and copy over after a time, but if something were to happen to peak my interest I could always check the disk. The other thing is I don't do rubbers.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/11/09

Wow. want to guess who the wife is doing?

This implies one of two things, they are swingers and she brought in a friend, or she is cheating somewhere else and is trying to relieve guilt or shame. Why guess just pull off the blinders, personally I have never found any that really blind you. This sounds like a group set up on the husband and many wives are fucking around. Sorry not my thing to many types of STD and HIV out there.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/11/09

I cant believe how many seemed to have liked this

Are they out of their minds or just plain braindead?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

You better know your wifes mind very very well if you do this.

If you are blindfolded and restrained, how do you know it isn't a dude sucking your dick?

Sorry, no way I would be able to enjoy it blindfolded and restrained. Only way I could do it is if I was so lightly restrained I could get loose quickly and only if I wee not blind folded.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by roscovich08/03/11

One of the stupidest,mindless, inept prattle I have ever skipped thru !!

This travesty of a literary skill is mind boggling! This is just a vile mind diarrhea!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31710/10/11

THE ELEMENT OF DOUBT

sustains many marriages. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/01/12

Wait

I got the impression that he was a man - 'A Monogamous Loving Male', who, without being said, was totally into fidelity.

Your story, despite well written, leaves out the possibility of his beginning to wonder if she was bi and, did her care, but more importantly - was there or is there going to eventually be another male involved. Notice I didn't refer to him as a man - just another male!

Thanks...it was a different read but good.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/08/12

All He's

All he's has to do now is set up hidden cameras in the bedroom and wait till next time.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31704/08/12

KNOCK KNOCK

Who's There, Guess. Stop right there. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by betrayedbylove04/08/12

Lousy

Just a fucked up story not worth anything but a cheap thrill, if that.
Knock Knock
Who's there?
Miranda
Miranda who?


HA

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous04/04/13

Don't think so

Don't think he would have put the blindfold on. Sure don't think he would have allowed himself to be tied up. And by the way, silk scarves don't bind anyone. It's impossible to tie a knot that holds anyone. This story just had too many weak links that made it unbelievable.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by imhapless04/21/13

Nice

A 5 for originality; plus it was really hot.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/16/13

load of shite

just did it so she go out and get her brains fucked out.....just another fuck slut whore...I hate cheating bitches...throw them out in the gutter where they belong

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Tim41304/04/14

Certainly

a male fantasy.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/18/14

Dream On

And then I woke up!c

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by RKreader12/10/14

fooled me - thank you!

This being the Loving (i.e. deceitful, cheating) Wives section, I expected something else: after lots of good 2-tongue oral sex and pussy licking, I expected Husband to suddenly get a cock in his mouth or ass. Where upon Wife reveals she has a bi lover that she wants Husband to "enjoy".
Husband kickks her out, once he is untied.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous05/19/16

ok wife and two women seduce him, wait till its wifes turn, she will want it

unless they are swingers this marriage is toast waiting on the oven to warm up
1*

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by PolyLvr07/03/16

Terrific story

Ignore the trolls who can't accept a story as written.
A wife who wanted to give her man a good time, with terms that she cold accept. Period

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31710/11/16

KNOCK KNOCK....MIRANDA WHO

Miranda-ize me. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Pappy710/13/16

Kind of a different story, which isn't all that bad.

However, wife evidently has access to numerous people she has sex with and who have very kinky imaginations. This one involved two or more women with a blinded and bound man. The next time this happens, and it will again, when he is blind folded and bound it won't be with silk scarves. More likely padded handcuffs and instead of two pussies he will more than likely be male raped until he is comatose. After all, even though she said it was for him, the flavor of the event says that it was for her. Now that he is used to being humiliated, even if he didn't know it yet, there is much more in store for him in her world. Someone said in a comment that this was a male fantasy. Maybe in San Francisco or the Oaklawn Area of Dallas but doubtful in the mainstream. But the writing was good and the story did flow so good on you for that.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous11/24/16

sorry a slut wife just doesnt turn me on

she has to many sexual partners and soon as she spoke and knew she wasn't in the room mask and all would have come off one way or another. Sometimes one has to remember, death becomes her.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Rc6801/13/17

Nothing here

Nothing erotic or worth reading here....2****

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Who's There?  or
More submissions by Many Feathers.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel