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by MayhemLass03/15/06

the juxtaposition ...

of this with your other new submission "Ephiphany" tells me that your very fertile mind and inspiring way with words and images continue to amaze - how stepping back and looking at that most primal of human urges can be seen in so many different ways. Underlying it, your innate sensuality is evident and provocative ... you Luddite you LOL

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by dcpoet4403/17/06

dig this.....

and i dug some of the word play as well.....nicely done.....don

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