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this hurts
and is formatted
with such intensity
that i can see the pain.
good job mizz.
~~
Hard hitting;
With feelings open, risk pain;
But to stayed closed,
Walls up
Denies the pain ~
As well as other feelings of love and exhiliration...
poetic justice
I enjoyed the read, mistress
Pretty powerful
Without relationships live is so empty; with them, so many times, so full of pain----what's a man to do?
Raw
The pain felt is raw and biting. A picture of horror at the hurts imposed by those we care about. Thank you
Hugo
words...
It can happen to you ~ hurtful words that wound your spirit like a bullet. You question ~ continuing.
As children ..
we learnt that 'sticks and stones may break our bones, but calling will not hurt us'...But as adults we realize that "words" can cut so deep... Well done.
INCOMING
is never a good omen. TK U MLJ LV NV
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