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minsueabout 18 years ago*deep breath* Honest comments are hard
This is semi-cute, semi-clever, but reminds me of the kind of thing one sees in semi-clever graffiti, often on a bathroom wall.
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agointeresting
a prose knows <grin... nice write! send critique via feedback~
duddle146over 17 years agoHeed the time.
Another country heard from. *grins* Mr. Efficiency checks in.
Amusing!
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoTime is precious...
but sometimes waiting is not wasted. Sometimes it can mean an entire change of venue. However filling in those lost 20 minutes shouldn't be a problem to someone with a creative mind. Very interesting poem.
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