All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 02'

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0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 18 years ago
The End?

Of Chapter One, I hope! Even though I loved this chapter it would be so much better if it were included with "Caught". Why? Because it makes a complete story. The part where she "rapes" his nose is a favorite fantasy of mine. And making him wait after she uses him sets up the next chapter - just make it a complete chapter, OK!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good

Good job for a first story.

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