All Comments on 'Spank Me'

by Goldeniangel

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mindzmindzabout 18 years ago
A litte abrupt, but the elements are there...

Hot, but a little too direct. If you'd written out the first incident and built up to this one, this one would seem a little less abrupt.

As an idea, perhaps the pair would decide to make her his secretary and help him seduce other girls in order to secure her own access to the fetish sex...

Keep it up, M.

millhouseBobmillhouseBobover 8 years ago
Loved this story!

Wonderful story - loved the long slow buildup!

RegretsRegrets12 months ago

I would love to a female spanked

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