All Comments on '98' To Find the Sun'

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lindianalindianaabout 18 years ago
Another very nice one!

An another nitpick...the line "Though I maybe young". It should be "Though I may be young". Forgive me, I used to teach high school English.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Staying true the heart stays cold

Commemorating and lifting on high

The bringer of that pain.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Coldness.

Loveless for years after having been soften by a special Someone. Coldness a constant companion. Sad and foreboding shadows.

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