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you have exactly created the picture of getting fit for the season...in sand style..I can see it all...You have been mentioned in today's review...
george
I like the way you instilled lines from songs into this poem, very creative and an excellent poem.
"Bad to the dieting bone"...
as George would remind you if he was watching the "one bourbon, one scotch, one beer" program you're on I love your combination of drawing in the elements of the beach {My ultimate fave place in the world} with another fave of Mine, rock music.
The visions you've penned are great and with the background of Thorogood...sooooooooooooooo bad its good!!!
Vixxx
yippee!!
I dont drink often, but you make me wanna margarita just for the hell of it!!
love your beach poetry, sandspike
:)
maria
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