well it was different to say the least, not sure wether i liked it or not but it was at least entertaining.
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Anonymous03/24/06
that was so hot
i'm so hard right now. keep writing, and the longer the better
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Anonymous03/31/06
hmmmmmm
wonderful...really gets to the erotic nerve centre of the brain. more please .............mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Anonymous04/07/06
has a new interest in train travel :)
enjoyed it very much ... quite like the idea of a chance meeting like that . Had me quite warm n wet :) waiting for another chapter with great interest ...keep up the heat ... X
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Anonymous09/03/06
strict but very fair
very erotic, arousing, makes the thought of train travel a more pleasing mode of transport
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Anonymous09/26/06
the rhythm
life has many different rhythms and i delighted in watching this author depict some of them. Coupling the rhythm of the train to the characters orgasms is an effective tie and brings unity to the entire story. it was an easy read with a fun plot that many of us have had a fantasy about or certainly will after reading this piece. Bravo to you Strict-But-Fair =)
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Anonymous11/18/09
Well written and a good length
It got me hard quickly and that is essential.
It is the sort of scenario often fantasised about, so can appeal to many.
It is also difficult to get the story length right as many go on for too long.
Sometimes one wants prolonged excitement, but often one just wants a quick thrill.
English
different
well it was different to say the least, not sure wether i liked it or not but it was at least entertaining.
that was so hot
i'm so hard right now. keep writing, and the longer the better
hmmmmmm
wonderful...really gets to the erotic nerve centre of the brain. more please .............mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
has a new interest in train travel :)
enjoyed it very much ... quite like the idea of a chance meeting like that . Had me quite warm n wet :) waiting for another chapter with great interest ...keep up the heat ... X
strict but very fair
very erotic, arousing, makes the thought of train travel a more pleasing mode of transport
the rhythm
life has many different rhythms and i delighted in watching this author depict some of them. Coupling the rhythm of the train to the characters orgasms is an effective tie and brings unity to the entire story. it was an easy read with a fun plot that many of us have had a fantasy about or certainly will after reading this piece. Bravo to you Strict-But-Fair =)
Well written and a good length
It got me hard quickly and that is essential.
It is the sort of scenario often fantasised about, so can appeal to many.
It is also difficult to get the story length right as many go on for too long.
Sometimes one wants prolonged excitement, but often one just wants a quick thrill.
awesome
Will watch out for more of your work :)
Definitely one of the best
By far one of the best things I have ever read on here. Perfect pacing and timing and, well....one is all a-fluster. Thank you.
Mmmm
a fine piece.
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