i was a bit disappointed that the wife got a morning after pill as it would have served her right to end up pregnant. The chances are that the kid would have been OK.Anyway I would like to hear if jeff and casey ended up together
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Anonymous02/13/14
very dissaponting story.
must be a happy cuck watching two others with his slut wife.
1 star
Cheaters are about the most stupid people alive. First we have the asshole husband screw a friend of his wife's, although he didn't know it yet. And in front of many witnesses. Stupid. When it came out that she was setting him up so she could fuck around she was caught. Stupid. My first comments made me laugh about this tale but now I'm just disgusted. Cheaters are assholes.
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Anonymous01/11/16
not to my liking
2 stars
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Anonymous02/13/16
hmmmm
Jeff should have taken pics of them and give them.to Steve's wife...
Steve is an ass hole and also an enemy of Jeff... he should have destroyed him.
2*Only coz Steve wasn't punish...he will go and destroy others family.
This has to be the worst story of yours that I've have read so far. I say this only because of the open ended ending that you left the readers. Not a very professional thing to do from a writer as good as you are. It just doesn't work from you. Oh well one star for this one sorry........
I like it when a lying, cheating, adulteress wife gets what she deserves. Because our divorce laws, divorce lawyers, and divorce courts are only interested in further punishing the victim(s)...the husband and in some cases, the children.
Bree got just what she deserved. I'm only sorry she didn't have Brandon's baby, given her attitude towards special needs people. 5 *'s
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Anonymous06/08/16
2 stars
Because I fucking hate goddamned rapists!!!
I hope Bradley is executed and Jeff is sodomized in prison!
Yeah I hate Steve and hope he gets his and Bree was evil but didn't deserve to be fucking raped!!
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Anonymous10/07/16
Another ending
He should have taken pictures of the whole thing, let her have Steve's baby, divorced her for doing it, exposed Steve to his wife and father-in-law so Steve gets what's coming to him for fucking a married woman, and then hooked up with Casey. Everyone is happy. Well, except for Bree and Steve, but then who cares about them anyway.
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Anonymous11/20/16
brilliant pay back for the cheating slut
she got what she deserved...pity she never got pregnant as she was such a bitch towards someone with special needs.....he was right to make her pay for cheating and hopefully he married Cindy after cleaning her pipes several times...maybe he got to block a=her pipe too with a baby which would be one in the eye for Bree...someone said she was raped but she consented to sex as she thought it was Steve so not rape...
Needed a good laugh. Bree the whore cheating cunt wife. And her friend Sylvia. The hell with the both of them.
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Anonymous02/27/17
Nope
DG, you messed up on this one. His best would have been to get evidence with a camera, keep Bradley out of it but tell Steve this would be kept away from his wife if he convinced Jeff he would not refuse to be with Bree until the divorce would be final. Bradley, being of the mental capacity he is, would have openly testified the truth and Jeff would be down the tubes. Jeff would remind Steve if he became divorced from his wife, he would lose everything, including his job. No, DG a 1 star on this one.
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jeff and casey
i was a bit disappointed that the wife got a morning after pill as it would have served her right to end up pregnant. The chances are that the kid would have been OK.Anyway I would like to hear if jeff and casey ended up together
very dissaponting story.
must be a happy cuck watching two others with his slut wife.
1 star
Well at least he found out who he could trust
Before he started a family - or at least before she did -
Very average
Very average
@ very disappointing story
Are you clueless? He wasn't a cuck. He burned the bitch..
Damn
Cheaters are about the most stupid people alive. First we have the asshole husband screw a friend of his wife's, although he didn't know it yet. And in front of many witnesses. Stupid. When it came out that she was setting him up so she could fuck around she was caught. Stupid. My first comments made me laugh about this tale but now I'm just disgusted. Cheaters are assholes.
not to my liking
2 stars
hmmmm
Jeff should have taken pics of them and give them.to Steve's wife...
Steve is an ass hole and also an enemy of Jeff... he should have destroyed him.
2*Only coz Steve wasn't punish...he will go and destroy others family.
SORRY !
This has to be the worst story of yours that I've have read so far. I say this only because of the open ended ending that you left the readers. Not a very professional thing to do from a writer as good as you are. It just doesn't work from you. Oh well one star for this one sorry........
My Kind Of 5-Star Story
I like it when a lying, cheating, adulteress wife gets what she deserves. Because our divorce laws, divorce lawyers, and divorce courts are only interested in further punishing the victim(s)...the husband and in some cases, the children.
Well . . .
It's not one of your best, but that's OK. Well written, moved fast, fairly interesting. Thanks very much.
Great story!
Bree got just what she deserved. I'm only sorry she didn't have Brandon's baby, given her attitude towards special needs people. 5 *'s
2 stars
Because I fucking hate goddamned rapists!!!
I hope Bradley is executed and Jeff is sodomized in prison!
Yeah I hate Steve and hope he gets his and Bree was evil but didn't deserve to be fucking raped!!
Another ending
He should have taken pictures of the whole thing, let her have Steve's baby, divorced her for doing it, exposed Steve to his wife and father-in-law so Steve gets what's coming to him for fucking a married woman, and then hooked up with Casey. Everyone is happy. Well, except for Bree and Steve, but then who cares about them anyway.
brilliant pay back for the cheating slut
she got what she deserved...pity she never got pregnant as she was such a bitch towards someone with special needs.....he was right to make her pay for cheating and hopefully he married Cindy after cleaning her pipes several times...maybe he got to block a=her pipe too with a baby which would be one in the eye for Bree...someone said she was raped but she consented to sex as she thought it was Steve so not rape...
Again
Needed a good laugh. Bree the whore cheating cunt wife. And her friend Sylvia. The hell with the both of them.
Nope
DG, you messed up on this one. His best would have been to get evidence with a camera, keep Bradley out of it but tell Steve this would be kept away from his wife if he convinced Jeff he would not refuse to be with Bree until the divorce would be final. Bradley, being of the mental capacity he is, would have openly testified the truth and Jeff would be down the tubes. Jeff would remind Steve if he became divorced from his wife, he would lose everything, including his job. No, DG a 1 star on this one.
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