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Brenda and David

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by Concritic12306/05/14

I just love Bobs stories.....

Thanks for all your efforts.

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by Anonymous07/17/15

Interesting story

And some funny comments. DWornock is correct when he says that sugar doesn't dissolve in gasoline but he's wrong about the damage done. The sugar either blocks the filter at the fuel intake, clogs the fuel filter or clogs up the fuel injectors and the car stops running. It is neither cheap or easy to clean the system out. And the Police don't care if lover boy doesn't have a drug record. Catching him twice is all the evidence they need to send him to jail. I do question how dumb the wife is though. If she talks to David and he tells her his suspicions about being setup, why wouldn't she KNOW that her husband knows about her cheating? That was the only weak link in the story. Otherwise a good story about a careful man that didn't want to hand a cheating wife half of everything. I will admit I'd like a second chapter to see if his plan works out. Good one Bob.

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by Anonymous10/03/15

Why?

Why the hell would you keep fucking the whore? Have the urge to get an incurable disease?

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by sbrooks10310/23/15

Bob, Sandi, and Pauline

I couldn't comment there, but I sent JPB some feedback on how the wife who previously refused anal could safely bring it up, and Brenda used my idea here!

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by nancyharpman1701/08/16

Midnight Prison Visits

In Louisiana, prisoners are released at one minute after midnight. She's not going to be suspicious about a midnight trip to the regional prison facility? Oh, well. A story of fiction. But I liked it.

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by tazz31701/08/16

DONT PLAN TOO HARD

or too far ahead and miss those ducks being aligned, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tw0Cr0ws04/11/16

@nancyharpman 17 01/08/16

re:
Midnight Prison Visits
In Louisiana, prisoners are released at one minute after midnight.

It's not that way in all states.
In Colorado the state lets them out in the day, so they can catch a bus to where their parole is at.
The counties let them out at 4am, it was midnight but the first place they would go is a bar and they would be back for a DUI before dawn.

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by Anonymous08/01/16

Stupid

No normal red blooded man would let a guy fuck his wife and just watch and listen. Ball bats are made for attention getting.

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