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A great story containing a true loving wife.
And in the loving wives section of all places. How ironic for some cheating wife story lovers. This is what the section is for IMHO. Thank you.
very nice romance
I do love a good romance of love and passion.
Thank you
Great
The title says it all.
Boyd
GREAT!
It doesn't get any more loving than this. A wondeful couple and wonderful loving!!
Not impressed..
Sorry, but this story sucked.
Purple Prose or Not
Too much purple prose and simili for my taste. Eeek...this sentence in particular made me giggle: "I leave the room to attend the seed of your loins and the fruit of my womb." The last part reminded me of the cereal Fruit Loops.
Just
I have just read this,I will remind the author that this is an erotic PORN site,I have read better than this in the agony aunts column of a daily newspaper.
rubbish
I cannot read stuff written in this tense...so boring
have no idea what this was about
why write in this tense - no one ever does and makes any story incomprehensible....
Never found a second person narrative I found plausible ..
Was she ..
- unconscious
- doped to the eyeballs
- just plain forgetful
- somewhere else?
Why did she have to be told/reminded.
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