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by LeBroz03/21/06

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Speaking of images here ~
Invokes another
Of loving across a continent
Of laptops, broadband, and video cam...

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by 4degrees03/21/06

fuck,

i needed that.
i've said that so many times, myself.
good one girl.

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by gotwood4903/22/06

nice imagery..

I really like this poem, Jett. It doesn't say too much in words, but lets hints form in the reader's mind...and that's the best kind! Nice work.

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