All Comments on 'Alan Ch. 22'

Chapter 21 is in the Literotica approval pipeline, with the current status listed as "pending." I submitted the chapters as a batch, and have no idea why Chapter 22 was approved before Chapter 21

Thanks for telling us what happened to chapter 21. To say I

was confused is an understatement!!

Thank you,

Joel

It is just a great story and cant wait for the next chapter.I check for new chapters everyday!!!!

This is the best story i've read on literoitica.com, and i've read alot of em, but the way you built the characters up, and the way he slowly gained more and more powers throughout the story was, exciting, i was always wondering what power he would get next, or how he would use it.

Masterfully written

Please continue on with the story. Your are doing an outstanding job. The character depth keeps getting better.

Thank you,

Joel

Finally you've got Allan back into intelligently using his mounting powers, both to find and restore Massimo, and to knock off another Casino for a new "kitty" of $3 mil, to fund his growing international business. Great move. Looking for more. Thank you.

Where's Ch 23 ? Feeling deprived ;(

Good plot good character build bad editing wasteful character usage and chapter 23 is missing still one of the better stories just needs cleanup and that missing chapter

Don't know why it's not posted here but a quick Google search for the author will turn up the missing chapter on a different site.

It seems as though someone or something has absconded with Chapter 23. The question just hangs in the air, will it be returned soon and how will we proceed without it? Will there be clues that we can follow to figure out what is missing?

Stay tuned . . .

I like Anne Marie!!!

Julian Coreto also published some work on storiesonline.net ... Guess which chapters are Still there? (stupid question; chap's 8 and 23)

I don’t see why lit won’t publish ch 23. I read it on another site and didn’t see anything wrong.

I was wondering if we would see Anne-Marie again. I liked her. Nice to see her again, even if it's just a brief get-together. She must have been gagging for a dose of Alan.

Where are the missing chapter? 8 I think and 23??

I've missed Kate.