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Mercury Mood

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by LeBroz03/22/06

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A morning dose of the Vixxx's thrill
And I can tell the Doctor never will
Find the cause or the cure of fornication flu;
He will poke, he will probe
All for naught
As this flu demands repeated treatments
In his 'ICU'

Don't get well soon!

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by Anonymous03/22/06

all the doctors

I ever see either old or can't speak much english...overcharge me and scoot me out ...must be that leather and lace you hide...smiles...awesome pen...as always...blue

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by EmJ038503/22/06

Such a treat!

just headed out the door but happened to see this as today's first verse of the day. Never knew being sick cud be so much fun! Time to go---and maybe I can find my own doc for some at home care!

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by PatHous5603/22/06

Playing Hooky

You caught me playing hooky on this perfect spring day but I had best not tell my boss I came down with fornication flu. But yours is a wonderful play on words. For this disease, the card you want will say "Don't Get Well Soon!"
Patricia

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by Anonymous03/22/06

I like that line

I like the line 'as the milk white shot of a lover’s passion flows' Helps with visual building blocks

Sarah

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by My Erotic Trail03/22/06

sexual healing

I can only say that I was going to write a poem about sexual healing and after reading this poem, well, it is a much better example of sexual healing than what I was going to scribble

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by RhymeFairy03/23/06

Wow !!

Sizzle right on through and give me some more !! I love the build up, the imagery and just plane hot lil read. It reads a bit more like a story, I would have trimmed it a bit, but I write'm short, so that's just me probably. Love this !! More Please ~

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by Anonymous03/23/06

Whoa......

Ask Sam and Dave sang "Hold ON I'm Cumxx....Coming"
Feel better now don't you? Loved it and danced to it.
sandspike

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by Anonymous03/26/06

Calling Dr. Love

WoW Girlfriend........I think I need to make an appointment with the Dr......SASSY

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Shee-yit!

It's so hard to write a sex poem that isn't LAME with a capital everything, but you sure as hell did! Excellent. :D

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by OSoBuff03/27/06

Fornication flu beats bird flu any day!!!

Now here's a disease that needs no cure---let there be regular outbreaks of fornication flu! Heck--sounds more real than the staging of flu for birds!

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by SweetDeal04/05/06

Fornication Flu!!!

Now I've heard everything. Just hoping they NEVER come up with a pill to cure that disease. In fact, here's hoping for a widespread outbreak! I can't wait to be bedridden! Or is that ridden in the bed?

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by CaPic26704/06/06

To Be Unwell!

With the right doctor making house calls, here is a disease to catch and never recover from. Now to just get that doctor with that special touch! CP

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