All Comments on 'Used & Abused Ch. 12'

you need to keep this story going. You need to let us know if Mike the husband ever finds out what the wife has been doning and what Mike's reaction is when he finds out that he actually cheeted on his wife with his wife and that she knows that Mike cheeted on her.

god i LOVE your writing...i am soaked...!!!...please don't stop now...it's like i am reading about myself except that instead of Glen and Ms Smolen i get used by my hubby and his brother and their friends...and like you, i LOVE being their slut...thank you so much for showing me that i am not alone...candy...xoxoxoxo

Please don't wait too long to continue this story. I must know what comes next!!! Thanks for giving fuel for fanatasies...

Thank you for a very enjoyable series and yes I would like you to continue also for I am selfish and wish to continuing my enjoyment and then I can write again and praise your work Thank you.

Definitly a "page turner". The day after I read it when I moved into my roommates, I strapped my black dildo strap on to a set of three pillows and I couldn't take it off because I repeatedly had the story come back to my mind. I'm not one for urination, but I definitly rode my pillows about 8 times that day. (unfortunately guilt would eat me alive and kill me to cheat) The thing is far bigger than my husbands so I like to stuff myself with it now and again... ^_^ Thanks for giving me something else to mentally take out my sexual fustration, your a babe! ^_^

Can't wait for Chapter 14. As a retired teacher, I now think back differently on my colleagues. Great detail in story writing.

i liked your story but that has to be the most racist depiction that i've read recently. that's so disappointing in this day and age. :(

An obvious way to see an author's prejudice is to compare the dialogue and tone of the main character/protagonist to that of other characters, (particularly ones with diverse/differing backgrounds). It's an age old technique used to "other" and will often reinforce harmful and derogatory stereotypes. I have been truly enjoying this story, but the way you have written Clem, from his dialogue to his mannerisms and depiction, devalues the story. It takes me out of the experience and makes it unpleasant to read the sections containing him. Making older black characters sound like Tom Robinson from Harper Lees' To Kill A Mocking Bird is a outdated and almost always racist trope that should not be perpetuated in the 20th century. I truly hope you learn from this as you have so much potential as an author. This comment was not intended to be offensive but constructive, it comes from a genuine desire to call out racism when I see it and to see you improve as an author.