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Becoming A Slut Wife: Bettina

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/27/06

Sad, sad

Sad, sad story. He is pimping her out to move ahead the corporate way. She has no respect for him, and he has no respect for her either. There is no love in this story. It's only sad. Talking about a cure for ED...NOT.

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by Anonymous03/27/06

Try encourage yourself...

Hiding in the hole....you won't know what will the outer world be...

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by d70photog03/27/06

Yah, why hang on?

... if she's moved on, then let her go. You're making the big ones, you've got a nice sob story, tell her it's you or him If she picks you, you win. If she picks him, start looking for someone who won't jump on a big dick.

A little thin, though. Love JPB's stuff, but sometimes he just seems to toss it off.

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by Anonymous03/27/06

Penthouse Letters?

I believe this is taken from a Penthouse Letters contribution, but I'm not going to spend the time going through my back issues and finding what issue it appeared in! lol

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by Anonymous03/27/06

where the stupidity ends

i know i not the ownly one feel this way.

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by Anonymous03/27/06

Sham marrriage

At what point did this pathetic, spineless, weinie boy, decide his promotion was more important than his manhood? Of course the wife blew off the marriage as soon as she saw that 10" cock! So what is everybody hanging on for? This is a sham marriage, and should be ended soonest! Please don't reproduce as these are gene pools that need to be discontinued!

Tim C.

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by sherlock4003/27/06

So, is it a 1 to 3 ratio JPB?

You write one story with a self-respecting, strong, loving husband that doesn't accept his wife cheating and you then are driven to write three that portray a husband as either a wimp or an asshole? Is that the ratio?

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by Just Plain Bob03/27/06

On the comment by Anonymous in USA

Between 1994 and 1999 I had several stories (letters)printed in Penthouse Letters, Gallery, Leg Show and a small magazine titled Turn Ons (surely you didn't think all those letters were real, did you?)and I have redone some of them and have posted them here. Go to my profile and pull up Coming and Going for example. It was a Penthouse Letters Letter of the Month. Alice In The Office was featured in Leg Show. Bettina was in PHL (in a slightly different form) but I don't remember the month and year. I have several other stories that were sent to various magazines that I am recycling and posting so don't be surprised if a story you read seems to sound familiar. I have over four hundred stories out there on four different sites and in at least six magazines.

Just Plain Bob

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by Anonymous03/27/06

Pride Is Good bobie

But not for a story of male self humiliation as you did here.

Were the other stories about pathetic helpless sick males as well?

There are times when I wish someone else had your talent to use in a more entertaining realistic life like more respectful manner. Don't you get tired of painting pathetic helpless self appointed humiliated males???

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by Anonymous09/21/08

farce

the marriage was farce and distance between wife, boss
and that whole situation overdue.

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by sheridan800005/07/10

and?

he will divorce? or he will stay married?
please finish the story :D

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by tazz31710/14/11

E.D. SLAYS MORE MARRIAGES

than the cockswain. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous10/29/14

SO a spineless husband story.

Didn't much care for it. Just not my cup of tea, but as the author once said, He can and does write whatever he feels. So we read what he writes and "That's all folks"! In this case I would like to see a sequel wherein hubby simply hires a PI and gets everything documented before he goes for the divorce, sues the Company and retires. Even an idiot attorney gets him 90% of the marital assets, an eight figure settlement and golden parachute from the Company. I always wonder why more authors don't pick up on a LOT of JPB and write sequels. They are so many unfinished stories.

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by tazz31710/29/14

FINISH THE LAST SENTENCE

Gone but trying to be forgotten. TK U MLJLV NV

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by PoormanRichman11/27/14

Ok WHY

OK Why do these guys in these situations ALWAYS play the victim?
WHY don't they EVER fight fire with fire?
Take this guy in this story. He is at home for 5 Days and waits for his slut. .Instead of treating it as an Opportunity to Look for someone else and stick it right back at the 2 of them.
IDIOT
That annoys the shit out off me. He gets this promotion and lots of free time and plenty of cash to go looking and he is too stupid to do it...MORON
Why do writers write morons???

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