All Comments on 'A Change in Surroundings'

needs proofreading (no offense). Couple of grammatical errors, and some words are missing from sentences, making it confusing.

I really enjoyed the beginning of your story and I hope you write more. This story is shaping up to be interesting and I can't wait to see how the undercurrent of attraction plays out. The only thing that took away from the story were the grammatical errors. Despite those, it was great. Maybe have someone else read over it before submitting it next time.

Such a great start. Will you write more? I hope you do!

I hate when these wanna be editors read stories and always leave dumb as comments. Matakes hapen everon isnt perftc. :)

extremely confusing with all the grammatical errors and awkward wording, but it seems to have potential. but what do i know? im not an editor or anything....

I liked it, i hope you can write more. it's really got me interested in what's going to happen

Great start.. can't wait to read the rest