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Great Story Line, continure it
Loved the story line, just keep going, more details, more dominance by the Goth.
Jeff
oooh
at last something that seems to be going somewhere.keep it up and have fun with it
thank you
i love the goth stuff. have a good one lets see some more ... good BBW Goth... ... yup
eh
Was ok sex was a little too fast and a goth and a paper boy? haha almost laughable!!!!!
Nod bad
It jumped right in to the sex. That's okay, but I wanted to get a little more development of both the characters. You know, a slower build-up. But, the goth was very aggressive as she said and she simply grabbed the kid and banged him.
Quick and fun read!
Why did you make this a chapter 2 ???? It would have been better as just a page 2 !
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