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WHERE CH.2
I HOPE YOU GET CH.2 OUT SOON. I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF THE STORY.
good
good start, potential for some lesbian stuff and group stuff with lesbians(or forced lesbianism) and male guards
Excellent!!!
Very erotic, and very well-written and true to life. Hoping Cinnamon gets pregnant, from Sarge, in a later chapter.
So beautiful
So well described, Cinnamon loosing her hymen, I could almost see it happen and enjoy her just lost virgin smell.
Certainly one of the finest deflowering stories I have ever read. And I read all I can, believe me. Jay being the big huge guy and Cinnamon just a tiny whisp of a thing, is so delighful. Nothing protecting her from those searching and implanted tadpoles either.
I read the latest story first, then this one. To know she was bred, this little virgin. Wow
what a wonderful story. Thank you
i ran across........
this one in the new chapter releases and decided it looked worth the read and man...it surely is all that...well worth it. I do hope you continue although i have a few chapters to catch up with from 1 to the present but im a quick reader especially when i enjoy something. Very well written and although i would have liked a bit more history on who,what,where and etc on why she was set up other than vengelfulness of a bitch....i bet its told thru out the story so im looking forward to that also. Thank you for allowing us to read you...respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Huh?
If this story is good how come it did not get 'H'? And the score of this story is way below the mark of 4.5. Either readers or trolls are pushing this story down or those who leave 'positive' comments here are errr...actually the writer him/herself?
Personally I think the story is not up to par. Kinda sick but then to each his/her own.
What really disagree withe me about this story is those long... AHHHHHHH.... FUCCCKKKKK. Sorry to say it's too amateurish. I'm surprise people still write like this.
Great start!
I can't wait to get to chapter 2! I thought it was a good opener for a "series."
This is good....But!
I read the whole story and liked it the only thing is that got me throwed off was that Cinnamon can keep loving him after all he does is fuck her brutally and not loving...And Jay being a asshole not giving her rest. Other than that the story was really good.
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