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by oregon_gal
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Anonymousabout 18 years agoi like it
Good write about being done wrong. The last verse is
good except the layout made me pause some the first
time I read it. The start of the 4th verse was my
least favorite. This is a heavy and yet not too long
or wordy poem. I'm glad I stopped to read it. sandspike
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