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MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 18 years ago
I like Birds

enjoin your rite

<winkz

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Hummingbird's lullaby...

What beautiful images this poem conjures up to invade the senses. I was especially enthralled by this verse:

Sweetness comes,

In one's back yard.

When the time,

Is right.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The metaphor's so apt, when love is found the heart's beat does so quicken.

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