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surely this has happened to you

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by Anonymous

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by Maria239403/27/06

dream journey

yes this has happened. beautiful images, tactile... i could feel the slippery and taste the minerals on my sleep walking tongue;)

excellent work, anna

xoxo

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by 03/27/06

Such grace.........

....and perception. This is wonderful Anna.

Tess

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by 4degrees03/28/06

this

makes me contradict
my earlier statement.
this is very nice, and
i wonder if i'm not
so superficial after all?

i could read this several times.
great po, gin.

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by MyNecroticSnail04/01/06

I like happenings

enjoin your rite

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by vampiredust04/02/06

Smart

A clever poem with some quite intriguing imagery. Love it
:D

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