All Comments on 'Lapdancing'

Loved the story - great stuff

It's been a long dry spell in the Group Sex category, but at last, Flynn77 has delivered one that's both hot and well-written. Thanks, dude!

Let me just say that I had to take a couple of breaks while reading this story, had a "small" problem that needed fixing...LOL.

I agree ... the "shy wife who becomes a slut" story is a great genre, and you conveyed it brilliantly!

Good story,well written and made me very horney. But it left me incomplete as not one pussy was shot in. I realize you might have left it this way for this very reason. So you get the 100 fm me plus I hope I dont miss your vacation story. Especially if your old lady got a shot of hot cum blasted up her cunt. Best to you Flynn77 okdeacon

I never thought I'd give a '5' to a story that included the phrase, "Wank off over me. . .Spunk on my titties. . .", but you pulled it off. Kudos to you! Excellent story (if it's true then...Damn!!!). Keep up the excellent writing.

I've never left feedback for a story before now, but this one was just too fucking hot for me to remain silent. I've cum 5-6 times over the last few days just reading it.

Your pacing is incredible with this story and builds up to a great crescendo. Would love to hear more stories from you.

One of the best stories I've ever read! I've cum about 4 times and my wife was also wanking herself reading it. Thanks.

One of the best stories I have read here or anywhere for that matter!! Very well written, actually gives me something to strive for with my stories! LOL Hope to catch the next memory from this author. Great Job, Flynn! VERY HOT!!!

Richmond, Virginia, USA. Loved your story! Had to work through some of the UK specific phrases, however always be yourself and let us figure it out. Good pacing, excellent erotic materials, great build up and "release".

Please do it again, note you've not been here since 2006. Should be plenty of new material, eh??

Looking forward to your next contribution....

Loved this story. Best in the group sex so far. very well written. And pretty much awsome

Absolutely brilliant. Definately one of the hottest stories I've read. If it's based on reality, which it feels like it is,then you are one very lucky bugger. By the way your wife sounds hot I'd love to see her.

One of the best stories on this site. Please keep writing...maybe more chapters to this one?? So very hot.

Well written and very erotic, with a great finish.

I really liked this story. Good detail got me very horny.

Excellent story. As a female reader, I could relate to the alcohol and peer pressure overcoming my reluctance. Continuing on to oral and penetration is beyond where I would go but it makes your story extremely hot.

I have to confess the twisted romantic in me kinda hoped Lucy would stop short of actually fucking the other guys, but you certainly managed to embue this tale with a raw sexual energy. (She fucked Tony and Carl, he fucked Stephanie; does that mean he gets a free pass with Linda?)

That should be Mark, not Andy, by the way.

So erotic and arousing. You described it so I could see it in my minds eye.

Rest of story okay.

Watching the wife move out of the way so all that pulchritude (sp?) ciould tease me would annihilate any promises previously made. Great story.

Jack

what a cool couple!!

It was a great orgy fest story, grammar is well written with only a few errors. I wish tho' you had added in a scene with Lucy getting speared by her husband and Tony. I can't help it, I love, love, love the ménage.

10 Big Blazing Stars, it was almost like I was there participating! Great Writing, Great Story, Great Imagination, and Great Effort. I am glad that no one was offended or got jealous or ran out throwing a fit. Though there is always the chance the the Guy with a much bigger dick will be approached by one or two of the wives for a repeat performance on the side. LOL Cheating is always a possibility. Thanks, Buster2U