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Great Start
I hope this continues. I think it show great potential. It would be interesting if Robert found he could no longer orgasm with her so he leaves her.
the revenge was for her to know who make her sore
the story was good.you were to kind to the girlfriend and best friend,for as long as the boy friend know what jonathan can do he worry about him taking her back.
don't stop now
a great beginning
loved it
loved the way he was able to control the slut and his cheating friend......and her ass was sore too.....
"Gift Of The Goddess Ch. 01:" - Jonathan, Dana, and Robert - (Friend, ex-Girlfriend and Her New Friend)
In reality, this exercise of mind control doesn't prove there is ESP possibilities. However, a reader's mind does have unlimited imagination, where any thing and every thing can and does happen.
Jonathan seems to be on a mission to vindicate himself to his ex-firlfriend for her leaving him for Robert. Jonathan's mind and body control abilities over Dana and Robert will serve him well as he pursues his vindication.
A well written story, with intrigue and some faint suspensions of the ex-firlfriend and her new-found lover. The character's are maneuvered and controlled adeptly, leading to the suspenseful aspects of the story.
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