I can not express my love of your writing and stories. This will not get much play for those looking for a jerking-off story. I am without words to say how this particular story has affected me. I can not get past this story for anything other then memories running amuck in this mature mind and heart.
Thank you doesn’t even come close!
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Anonymous03/31/06
Fantastic DG
Words can't explain the thank you for this stor. Brings back a lot of memories. I agree with the past comments, This story probably won't get to many except for us old people. Again thank you for an exceptional read
A fan always
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03/31/06
Very
nicely done, DG. I really enjoyed the emotions you pulled on this one. You never fail to write something with depth and detail. Great job.
I believe you just wrote the story of my life. Everything is so close except for the ending. I am still rambling around in the house after three years and I don't expect that to change. It is a great read for the older readers.
A special one for us ‘Old Farts’! Such depth of emotion. I can’t say just how much this particular story has affected me. After 40 years with the same wonderful woman I try not to think too much about our mortality and the way that the years go speeding by. I love your writing and stories and look forward many more years of enjoyment - thank you for an exceptional story. Pete.
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Anonymous03/31/06
More KUDO's
I think almost everything that can be said has been said so I will just say again - please don't change a thing about your style and mindset.
You are appreciated Author - With Very High Regard
DG:
This is my second reading of your story and it's just as powerful the second time around. You've certainly got the emotions, feelings, and thoughts down to a "T." My mate has been gone for over 10 years. Thankfully she didn't linger, due to sepsis, but then it happened so suddenly I wasn't mentally prepared. Now if my life only had Eddy's happy ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous04/01/06
i always love reading your stories
DG you're an incorrigible romantic keep up the good work
and very loving...Thank you for sharing that with us, it was very touching. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
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Anonymous04/05/06
Wonderfully Done
DG, you are a great writer. The feelings that you write about are so real. I have been married for 22 wonderful years. I wouldn't change them for anything. My wife is facing some health problems and it scares me to death. Your writing gives me some hope. Thanks.
DG, As many people who have read my work on this site know, I have experienced this type of loss, your description and depth of understanding is so moving, that it inspires your readers to get back out there and live again. Thank you for taking the time to write for us.
Great story as always. DG, your stories are always well written. Thanks. Ricky
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Anonymous02/09/07
beautiful
a feel good story. thanks
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Anonymous05/16/07
incredible
A beautiful tale of getting old - one that touches even youngsters like me. I also adore your style of writing.
Just don't tell me you've conceived this masterpiece through sheer imagination... it looks all too real.
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Anonymous03/03/08
A real life story with great feeling
Thank you D.G. Hear for showing it's possible to write an erotic story with real life honesty to it. Whilst, over time I have enjoyed many stories in Lit, this is the first time I could feel the people were real and the story not just a fantasy. You portray the erotic side of the story very well and keep us interested all the way through. I will always avidly read all your stories D.G. Hear and wish you well in your life and storywriting.
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Anonymous05/19/12
My wife has terminal cancer and i can identify with your story
8 years of chemo we have endured and the pain pills. She refuses to leave me and our children. We stopped sex years ago because of the pain it gives her but she said she will endure it anytime i can to take her. The constant pain she fights, she rest when she can, and the numbness the chemo has caused in her nervous system she lives with. She has again lost her hair for the third time. There will be no new love for me this was a marriage when i was already older and she 21 years my junior. But the feelings you describe I can relate to. Fortunately to the best of my knowledge neither of us has ever cheated on the other. Thank you, I feel the tendency to cry but wont, I hold it for the day I am alone.
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Anonymous06/10/13
Errors
You or your proof readers need to learn to spell. I have read all of your stories alphabetically to this point and have enjoyed them. However, in each story there have been spelling and grammatical errors.
English
WOW....
DG...this was fantastic. You spoke for many of us that are older and have lost a spouse or someone we deeply loved. Great story line and writing too.
You are incredible in your insight of feelings
I can not express my love of your writing and stories. This will not get much play for those looking for a jerking-off story. I am without words to say how this particular story has affected me. I can not get past this story for anything other then memories running amuck in this mature mind and heart.
Thank you doesn’t even come close!
Fantastic DG
Words can't explain the thank you for this stor. Brings back a lot of memories. I agree with the past comments, This story probably won't get to many except for us old people. Again thank you for an exceptional read
A fan always
Very
nicely done, DG. I really enjoyed the emotions you pulled on this one. You never fail to write something with depth and detail. Great job.
My Story
I believe you just wrote the story of my life. Everything is so close except for the ending. I am still rambling around in the house after three years and I don't expect that to change. It is a great read for the older readers.
Thanks DG !!
A special one for us ‘Old Farts’! Such depth of emotion. I can’t say just how much this particular story has affected me. After 40 years with the same wonderful woman I try not to think too much about our mortality and the way that the years go speeding by. I love your writing and stories and look forward many more years of enjoyment - thank you for an exceptional story. Pete.
More KUDO's
I think almost everything that can be said has been said so I will just say again - please don't change a thing about your style and mindset.
You are appreciated Author - With Very High Regard
Memories roar back
DG:
This is my second reading of your story and it's just as powerful the second time around. You've certainly got the emotions, feelings, and thoughts down to a "T." My mate has been gone for over 10 years. Thankfully she didn't linger, due to sepsis, but then it happened so suddenly I wasn't mentally prepared. Now if my life only had Eddy's happy ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.
i always love reading your stories
DG you're an incorrigible romantic keep up the good work
Wonderful!
But then I expect no less from you!
well done....
and very loving...Thank you for sharing that with us, it was very touching. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Wonderfully Done
DG, you are a great writer. The feelings that you write about are so real. I have been married for 22 wonderful years. I wouldn't change them for anything. My wife is facing some health problems and it scares me to death. Your writing gives me some hope. Thanks.
Very Moving
DG, As many people who have read my work on this site know, I have experienced this type of loss, your description and depth of understanding is so moving, that it inspires your readers to get back out there and live again. Thank you for taking the time to write for us.
Great Story
Great story as always. DG, your stories are always well written. Thanks. Ricky
beautiful
a feel good story. thanks
incredible
A beautiful tale of getting old - one that touches even youngsters like me. I also adore your style of writing.
Just don't tell me you've conceived this masterpiece through sheer imagination... it looks all too real.
A real life story with great feeling
Thank you D.G. Hear for showing it's possible to write an erotic story with real life honesty to it. Whilst, over time I have enjoyed many stories in Lit, this is the first time I could feel the people were real and the story not just a fantasy. You portray the erotic side of the story very well and keep us interested all the way through. I will always avidly read all your stories D.G. Hear and wish you well in your life and storywriting.
My wife has terminal cancer and i can identify with your story
8 years of chemo we have endured and the pain pills. She refuses to leave me and our children. We stopped sex years ago because of the pain it gives her but she said she will endure it anytime i can to take her. The constant pain she fights, she rest when she can, and the numbness the chemo has caused in her nervous system she lives with. She has again lost her hair for the third time. There will be no new love for me this was a marriage when i was already older and she 21 years my junior. But the feelings you describe I can relate to. Fortunately to the best of my knowledge neither of us has ever cheated on the other. Thank you, I feel the tendency to cry but wont, I hold it for the day I am alone.
Errors
You or your proof readers need to learn to spell. I have read all of your stories alphabetically to this point and have enjoyed them. However, in each story there have been spelling and grammatical errors.
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