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So very hard
This was so very hard to read once, harder to read twice and harder to comment on.
It makes an impression. Takes a reader to where they don't wish to go. Makes a soul travel on a flight that they know will not end happily, but sadly is traveled by so many.
I have no words to give you, only a shed tear for the images you have provoked.
A kiss lays by your pen.
~ Red
Damn good piece
Deals with some uncomfortable feelings with gravitas. Well done there!
There are no words
to describe what the piece does. It reaches deep and grabs a piece of us all that wants to scream, to hurl invectives and furniture at the monsters that prey upon children. I commend you for your command of a situation that hurts us all but no one more than the child.
So touching!
Absolutely wonderful! You have put so much emotion in here, it makes me weak. Well done!
yep...
pretty much sums it up BW.... kinda sugar coated to me..
sorry for the welt in the PG
I like hell
enjoin your rite
too true
This describes much of my life, the first part is what I deal with now, the second part is what I dealt with then, but not my daddy, a relative tho...someone I should have been able to trust...almost too real for me...........
Deeply Descriptive
This sent a shiver down my spine because I could feel the emotion and heart behind your writing. I was touched and it stirred my emotions. Thank you.
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