All Comments on 'Dominating Ken Pt. 09-10'

was there something missed between chap 9 & 10???

Just finished reading it all. I thought it was absolutely fantastisc. keep up the good work.

This story was as well written and erotic as "The Making of a Perfect Husband" with significant differences. I'll probably come back and read this again. I have you saved as a favorite author so as long as you don't delete the story I'll read it.

Why treat another human being like that? I you want a toy, buy a blowup doll. You treat people like that, you belong in jail. What a bitch.

Even for fiction. Does he exist without a spine, pride or self respect? Does he never leave the house? Because it doesn't seem like he could function outside her control. And what about any of his friends or family? Surely they couldn't be happy about his circumstances. And if her family knew of her behavior, they would be disgusted as was this entire story - disgusting.

She should have gotten a dog. She would have treated it better than this drivel. Bad even for fiction.

Love the pace and the power exchange. The female chatacters are all sublime

This story quickly become my favorite on this site. I totally picture myself as Ken. I don't know how much precum I consumed while reading this. I never allowed myself to cum in the days it took me to read it.

... that grammar, spelling, usage, punctuation, and other generally accepted rules of English don't have to be followed to write a hot story. However, rowing through all the errors became quickly tedious so I just jumped ahead to make my comment.

Great concept poorly executed.

Sorry, but that's how I see it.

It didn't.

Just made me sad that you get off on such crap.