All Comments on 'Aunt Betty's Visit Ch. 01'

by lonelyssbbw

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Spider1Spider1about 18 years ago
Good start

You've really built up the tension. I hope the release will be just as fine. Looking forward to more. Good job.

HL55HL55about 18 years ago
Excellent wee tale... Great potential too

Nice wee tale lass thank you. Great bit of lead in to the various permutations with nice hooks too.. Again some time was spent on details na even tho little was given over to the taboo aspects, ie mom or aunt Betty, still it does show thru.... Potential i n future stroies of the week and more re others in the family too.. Please write them soon lass

pax HL

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great start

Nice buildup - I can't wait for the next part.

Btw what does the "SS" part of SSBBW mean?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Start - Want more

I love the situation that you have created. It is unexpected and totally different. I am really excited to see where you go with it. So please continue and don't hold us in suspence

canuckCDcanuckCDalmost 12 years ago
MORE!!!

Please continue this story!! It is HOT!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Don't leave us hangin' . Finnish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More!

Make up application?

When will Leanne be able to jack off?

mattenwmattenwalmost 2 years ago

If you have this mother and this aunt, you don't need enemies anymore. He has them in his own family!

pamelacdnzpamelacdnz10 months ago

What a shame it was never continued. A great read..

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