Wonderful job, Kev! It's even better reading the second time around. Sensual and mesmerizing, and the mention of "Happy Nipples" still makes me smile. Good luck.
This is a lovely contribution to the Earth Day contest. I was with the character right from the beginning and you made me 'see' the flashes. Superb story-telling, exquisite words and breathtaking images. I'm really impressed by this one!
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Ancient Ties
This was a great concept, well done. I loved the line: "You won't get splinters." :)
Agreed!
Well thought out. The many transitions were handled pretty well, it flowed together. Nice ending.
Beautiful
Wonderful job, Kev! It's even better reading the second time around. Sensual and mesmerizing, and the mention of "Happy Nipples" still makes me smile. Good luck.
:)
nice addition to the contest...
Good Luck...
~LB~
A real 'tree't
This is a lovely contribution to the Earth Day contest. I was with the character right from the beginning and you made me 'see' the flashes. Superb story-telling, exquisite words and breathtaking images. I'm really impressed by this one!
Nice job of setting a mood
The flow of the writing seemed a perfect match for the story. Good luck.
Rumple
Lovely story for a difficult contest.
I remain impressed by this story, my dear. Elegant prose and a very sensual experience. Nevertheless, "proofreader" is one word, not two. :-p
Beautifully written
A rich and wonderful read. I enjoyed.
Thank you,
janiexx
*smiles*
Lovely contribution to the contest Kev. Good luck and happy writing.
Lizzy
Something Sensual and Different...
I enjoyed your story. It was a wonderful, very original concept. Best of Luck!
Interesting story
And very well written. Good luck in the contest.
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