My Mom the Showoff

mmmmmm

nice

Sexy Story

Thats a hot story. Made me get very hard. Could visalize that being me doing that. Hot Hot story.

erotic

short & sweet

hot

you could have added your mother getting pregnant to the ending would have made it very erotic

great story

I loved the slow tease. A week long tease would have been nice.

mmmmm... very hott

Your story was really hot... it made me hard also... but I read it again to relieve my self... thank you for the story... Larry

it was sexxy

your story made me hard so I ummm... stroked while reading it... it really was a good story...

Spell correctly please

Please learn to spell correctly.

Not bad at all

Good flow, excellent visual descriptions. Not as long as story as I like usually, but good stuff. Thanks!

How old ?

I LIKED THE STORY ALOT , GOOD BUILD UP .IT WOULD HELP MAKE IT SEXIER IF WE KNEW THEIR AGES . I'M SURPRISED THERE WAS NO TOUCHING .

Sequel !

Nice slow buildup

Nice start, but...

The actual sex should have been more detailed; you go from the tease to the climax with too much haste; never a good idea!

Very good BUT

I did like it very much i just wish it was a bit longer and i hop there are more to come

We would like part two

please if you have time would youwrite part 2 if there is a part two thx.

WAY TO GO

You should write more this is good stuff!

plz... write MORE!... Awesome story!!!

MORE please!!!

a great story of hot motherfucking

I agree with the anon who wrote "hot." It's great when a boy sticks his fine fat prick up his mother's mommy-hole, but best of all is when the lad fucks a baby up his mother's cunt. It makes the boy super-proud of his big prick and his potent young balls. Mom, too.

Illiterate crap - why can't you use spell check?

Wow good story.

Pls send 2nd part.

PROOF READER/ EDITOR NEEDED

If you found a proof reader/ editor, your stories would be readable... and just where did you study grammar, etc.?

Love to keep

a house tidy.
Thanks