All Comments on 'Burgundy Lips'

Really hot story, even though it has stopped short of fucking!

Two mature women literally devouring a young man.

Congratulations, what a marvellous story!

In accordance with the previous speaker the action could have been a bit longer.

somewhat disappointing - a nice subject, but too fast paced and over far too quickly - a a typical performance from a young man! when will you realise that us older ladies like to make it last?

It seems that the reader who wrote the "typical young man" comment somehow misunderstood the story.

It is not about a young guy having control and just looking for his own pleasure.

He is pleasured by the older women .... and what is wrong if they just take care of him this time?

luved the way these two experienced women laid their trap and had their man, fantastic!

realy liked it the oldies are always the best no hang ups shot of myself

Very well done. Lovely description and gentle build of tone and atmosphere. Very daring to write from a man's perspective!

Enjoyed the story except that was MUCH too short!!!

As they say in Ireland, 'the old pots make the best porridge'. This is literate and well paced. Keep it cumming.

Not bad for the beginning of a story. Needs much more detail, intimate descriptions and actual sexual contact. I feel like I've been teased enough to get my pecker hard and then had cold ice water dumped on me.

good start , but needs more development-- more detail, more sex.

A very erotic story, similar in many ways to some of my teen fantasies. I loved it.

Every young (or old!) mans dream!

You deserved a five for this story but something went wrong when I voted and only two stars got marked.