All Comments on 'Drawing Love'

by Lauren Hynde

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
drawing castles

in the air of the object of our affections...a hard one to live up to ...in the real world...nicely penned...blue

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 18 years ago
Drawing a memory...

from a future image of love is difficult, at best, to create, yet you have successfully penned a masterpiece, Lauren. Although I have often voted on your poems, I have never ventured to comment as, quite frankly, I am intimidated by your avid display of word usage that usually do a fly by over this woman's head. I vote on them because, like this one, I "feel" the mood of the poem and like what I feel <smile> For Me, that is what it takes to earn a five; the pure enjoyment derived from a well written piece.

I felt compelled to comment on this one, however, as the only other one that seemed to grasp what this SONNET is about {and it is indeed a sonnet; requiring only fourteen lines which it meets} happened to be another fine poet, bluerains.

"Drawing Love" drew Me out of the shadows and into the public comment arena for your work, Lauren. Thank you for this lovely poem.

Vixxx

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