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To Bridge the Gap

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by Anonymous

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by My Erotic Trail03/30/06

I felt ya

a deep and touching poetry wild~ hoping all your tomorrows see no more gaps

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by Anonymous03/30/06

feels like

a warring angel standing in the gap with sword in hand...reminds me of the green mile...great images...blue

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by MyNecroticSnail04/01/06

I like gsps

touchy bridge of fetchingness
enjoin your rite

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by RhymeFairy07/31/06

Gripping ...

Wow, this one grabbed my attention.
Love the imagery and felt sooo much grief.
Great poem Sweets ~

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by Neteru08/08/06

Wonderful

Awesome poem, well written, fantastic imagery. It's takes an experienced poet to turn pain into something beautiful.

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