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Loved it
Mmm, that was lovely. You have quite a way with the supernatural. The way you write it's almost as if you have the inside scoop on these creatures. I love the roughness because it seems they wouldn't feel or view pain quite the same way as a human, especially as they heal so quickly. But how quickly do their hearts heal? Very evocative and mysterious and gloomy and loved the club scene too.
More! More!
Tell me more of this HOT story! A vamp & a were. Who knew?! Great characters & even better sex! Wow!!! Keep up the GREAT work!
Hot!
You really dont get enough of this stuff around - I swear, hottest thing I ever read
OMG!!
Is there anyone you want dead? because I'd kill to read more of this story! *fav*
TQ very much for writing
I so damn enjoy it!
Awesome, hot read! thanks!
Hi! Thanks so much for such an enjoyable, hot read. Very sexy characters and I like the roughness, fits with their natures and who they are. Great stuff!
Err....
There's more coming right? Because otherwise that would be just cruel.
this is a great story. you have to continue with this story line. it would not be fair.
whoo hot tamales!
I know this is probably a stand alone but I'd love to see more of the same. or even a different story but like this? idk but this is hot and i like it and i love your other stories too :-)
Happy WRiting
Thanks! :-)
why is there not more?
Amazing
Boooo ;( You've totally left your readers hanging!
I hope there is more to this as it seems like we are missing some important things..
SISSY
DANG IT ! YOU DID IT AGAIN ! YOU WROTE ANOTHER SHORT ONE THAT IS GOOD ! THIS ONE NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS ALSO ! BOY YOU SURE ARE GOING TO BE BUSY WRITING MORE THESE TO SERIES OF BOOKS , HUH !
A part two would be good.
Would answer some questions.
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