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Well
We are back to normal JPB!
something about Americans?
I enjoyed your few stories where the husband developed a spine, see you are reverting to your American roots it appears to be a fascination of of Americans to humiliate or be humiliated her husband should have shot her unless he was getting it somewhere else in which case they would deserve each other.
The story itself was reasonably well written although in my browser your stories tend to go off the right hand end (perhaps my stupidity) or maybe the way they have been formatted but makes reading hard anyway
Hey don't lump all Americans in that bowl
There are "some" of us who are American's who are just as turned off by some of the sex play in this story as you were! Just because we live here doesn't mean everyone feels that way and is intrested in doing things like that. I can't believe you even suggested that. That doesn't really speak well of folks who make comments like this.
I think Bob as an author may be trying to "Broaden" some of our horizon's. Problem is at 36 mine are already as broad as they are going to get or I will allow them to be. And I think my stomach fliped over about 50 times attempting to read this story. I had to skip a few paragraph's of action just so I could finish the story to know how it ended.
-Writting style and imagery: were fantastic.
-Subject matter: not bad and well thought out.
-Sex scenes and suggested activities: I'll have to get back to you on that after I finish puking up my breakfast.
-Risq
Cream Pie Vomit
What the hell is wrong with you? Eating another man's cum out of a woman's pussy is the most disgusting thing I can think of -as bad as eating dog shit.
Your stories always feature this cream pie eating nonsense. What man could stand to eat another man's cum? You are beyond fucked up.
Gag a maggot !
Agree with majority here.
Spoiled what had been a fairly decent story.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...GGGGGGGGGGGGGGG G
Gave it a 1--there is not anything lower
Which is what it deserves.
Say Humiliated bobie - are you really english?
Your fever for helpless males and or pathetic male humiliation seems to indicated an english heritage regarding the self cuckolding virus with the creame pie variant. Perhaps you lived there and become infected?
In any case, it is clear that more and more semi-human readers distain your talented work because as in the wizzard of oz, you need a heart to become more human and less demented in the demeaning of men.
Rather a shame - a waste except for the +/-1% of sick jaded humiliation freaks who love you to pieces.
Oh that is funny!
I don't know if you meant it that way or not--but when I got to the end I just laughed my self silly. Here is a woman who wants a man on the side and a stay at home husband. The husband finds out life is terrible without his wife around. The boyfriend does not want to be responsible for the MILF. So eventually they end up back the way it was--who says you can't go back again. Very funny
JimDinMN
Actually very screwed up and very uninteresting.
Thanks***
For sharing.
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