Wonderfully romantic. I'm a sucker for romantic encounters more than anything. I really liked some of your descriptions, such as "little grace notes of color..." Being a musician as well, that type of description resonates with me. I also liked it when Dev was asking, begging, Mara to tell him she loved him. Mmmm...
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Anonymous08/10/06
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It was good. not quit you day job good but still good
English
Sweet and hot
A tasty little tidbit of a story.
The setting and action described so well I couldn't help but get drawn into it.
And the little twist in it added a nice flavour to the story.
Well done.
Tincture...d
Excellent. Real depth. Quite the celebration of all that ought be good.
Yummmm!
I need to take more of those long lunches myself. Beautiful story.
Nicely Done
Wonderfully romantic. I'm a sucker for romantic encounters more than anything. I really liked some of your descriptions, such as "little grace notes of color..." Being a musician as well, that type of description resonates with me. I also liked it when Dev was asking, begging, Mara to tell him she loved him. Mmmm...
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It was good. not quit you day job good but still good
Knives.
The knife was nice. A /little/ thrilling. A very romantic story. I like it.
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