A very nice story, fast paced and exciting. It was funny too, and that dosent happen in a lot of romance stories. The ending was a little abrupt though.....will you be writing a sequel? I sure hope you do!! Its an awesome story!!
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Verry Nice!
A very nice story, fast paced and exciting. It was funny too, and that dosent happen in a lot of romance stories. The ending was a little abrupt though.....will you be writing a sequel? I sure hope you do!! Its an awesome story!!
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