- All
Comments (73) More Comments (73 total): Page: 1 2
- Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
great story
But i just don't get it, how Jack could keep the pranksters Bill and Jim as friends.
And seeing the way he reacted towards Bree after catching her with her getting-even-number, it would have been more believable, if he had totally quit friendship without evertalking to them again.
anyway, just keep up with stories like that and i will keep reading them.
The 11th story
I have read the 11th story, where friends, collegues and neighbors did prank or fraud with fidelity............
Nice change
to read a story where the two involved parties each find happiness with new partners instead of getting back together.
why care's about bree
the only real issue is the Jen and Jack friends? thing
1 i thank god dont know to many men willing to take back a cheater into there lives, i mean the way she did well, no, jack is a fantasy no man's gonna want her around to much hate and hurt..human nature and his cunt new wife aint gonna get him to Bree's wedding..seriously weak plot
2 WTF Jen this woman crushed your man who fucking saved you from rape and jen brings her back into his life, and Bree is still pissed at jack for talking to his scumbag friends..that is none of her business, but this point i believe again human nature, but i just think jen is a christian do-gooder cunt and should be squashed like a bug
monkey boy, calm down
monknotsocalm, we sympathize with your innate ignorance. It must be difficult for you going through life knowing you are at the shallow end of the gene pool. Constantly having to paddle away from the drain.
I guess it is best that the only females who would voluntarily associate with you cannot breed, since they are either a vinyl blow-up doll or pixellated images.
I find it hard to believe...
...that a woman who had discovered to the full what a self-destructive force the desire for revenge can be, would still cherish the desire for revenge and carry it into a new relationship.
If her new partner had loved her, would he not have got her into psychotherapy to help her conquer the streak of vindictiveness that she cannot control alone?
Disagree with Potsherd
Bree's problem wasn't "revenge" per se. Her problem was that she made a snap decision, about someone she was supposed to have loved, without all of the facts. She never saw her 2nd husband cheating. She "assumed" facts not in evidence.
Dealing with white Americans (and American women in general), I have learned that there are human predators in the world. It is the basis of our country and it's culture. The only thing predators respect is pain. Forgiveness and compassion are over-rated, when dealing with savage and ruthless people. You need to hit them hard and quick. Or they will just keep coming back at you. The antelope runs away, only to be hunted by the same lion, the next day. Now if he stomped the lion to death in his sleep, the antelope, and the baby antelopes wouldn't need to look over their shoulders in days to come.
Bill and Jim, did not have any empathy for the wreckage they left in their wake. Until..., they were part of the wreckage.
Robert
Bree
Was just a spiteful, cheating cunt that didn't deserve a happy ending. She literally had NO idea who was having sex in the office that day, but she grabbed the opportunity with both hands, in order to get some strange cock. In her excitement at seeing her chance, she convinced herself that it was her husband. This was finally her chance to get revenge on her first husband, and she wasn't going to let rational thought get in the way! She was sitting on a strangers cock within 10 MINUTES of leaving the office. Doesn't sound like a devastated wife to me!
Short Note !
ATTENTION PEOPLE ! Literotica is not real. These are just stories of fictional people in a fictional world !!! RELAX !! Continue on to another story on some other site ! Come back when you have calmed down !!
1*
Too bad this is the only time I've given this writer less than 5*. I don't feel the need to justify my rating, my opinions are my own, just as valid as anyone's and worth just what you pay for them. Flame away.
upset and disappointed
I read the first part of this story and it is so incredibly sad. Nothing in this story is good because the 2 that really should have worked it out were Jack and Bree. If anyone should have been castrated it should have been Bill and Jim. Jack was an asshole for even letting them back in his life after what they did to him. The tragic person in this story is Bree. She was a complete victim of Bill & Jim. Jack is an asshole..period. He should have shown the greater love and understood how it would effect her especially after what her 1st husband did, which Jack fully knew. I would beat the shit out of Bill and Jim and held my wife, even as wrong as she was to do what she did. God I hate this story because the lives of 2 people who were in love were destroyed because of some sick prank! I know its only a story but such shit happens everyday and it breaks my heart. regardless that Jack and Bree found others, it still isn't the same as their first love was. They would still be together if it wasn't for Jim and Bill and I place all fault on Jack for allowing them to continue on in their pranks. Jack is the asshole and Bree had to pay the price for his pride and lack of understanding. Bree was wrong but she needed Jack to help her out with her guilt and shame after she learned the truth and not divorce her. I wish you would write an alternate ending to this story where LOVE wins and not evil!!! Getting remarried is not love winning in this case because the 2 people most hurt still loved one another. The stuff that happened to Bill and Jim was pathetic for no revenge would ever bring Bree and Jack together again. Perhaps if they had their revenge together that would be a different story.
@Upset
Jack is a complete asshole? I think not. It was deja vu for Bree but she snapped and didn't even get a complete picture before she took her revenge. she is not a complete victim here, bull shit. Her husband didn't have to understand anything, she broke their vows and trust. I doubt if If I would have taken up with the douches again either. I think in the long run they are both better off. He has the right to decide if he can get past her actions, he couldn't. That makes him human.
Stupid
The destruction of her marriage was on her. The two idiots deserved some pain and Jack should have punished them for what they did. I have seen revenge fucking before and it is one of the stupidest things a woman can do. It only makes it easier for her man to walk away. For the most part revenge is a waste of time. When a marriage is coming to an end, smart people grab as much stuff as they can on as they jump ship.
Yeah nah
The two guys were assholes, sure, but no one forced her to go and fuck someone else. In the span of an hour. In her marital bed.
comments
i just love these jokers that mouth off & to chicken to give their names !!!!!!!!!
@flarebel2327
I'm not too chicken to put my name out put yours out and so will I. Ifusing a screen ID as your name and commenting garbage like an unregistered anonie makes you feel good have at it, as for me Lauren took my Id for disagreeing with one of her different IDs too much. Nice picture on your profile, Your mother?
OK,But...
Didn't care for this one nearly as much as the excellent original. The first page looked like you just used the same words as hubby used in his telling of the story,just changing the pronouns.
I felt that the closeness between Bree and the cop as well as the characters" relationships in general were rushed through in description.
The hospital scene with the two dickwads was funny for a sentence or two,but got old fast.And those mysterious 3 women.It was like Tony Soprano called in Sal,Louie,and Carmine from Detroit to "do a job".
OK story,BUT...
Nice
It was great that the good people involved had a happy ending and the jerkoffs got what was coming to them. As life should be.
Fiction Imitates Real Life
Real people make snap decisions. Snap decisions lead to life-altering mistakes. That is why our prisons, jails, correction and detention centers are so full of inmates. And that is why so many marriages wind up destroyed.
Beautiful story
YOU ROCK BREE. it got me really thinking about this story. I wonder if Jake had something to do with it? As for you Bree. How in the hell should you have known it was prank? But. You made the mistake you owned your mistake and corrected your mistake. Top marks to you Bree. Top marks
I don't get it
When Bree saw her first husband screwing around she confronted him. This time Bree just ran out the door and grabbed the first guy she could find to screw. I believe that Bree would have confronted her second husband but that wouldn't make this a story.
A SAD PATHETIC SLUT
who went off half cocked and would not listen...but decided to screw a guy within hours to get even only to find it was all a joke...had she bothered to ask why it went off or confronted hubby she would have found out it was a joke...but screwed up big time....he should have kicked the pranksters big time for ruining the marriage....but in the end they both got what they wanted and he did allow his friends back.....
Jack is an annoying twit for staying friends with those two losers!
Bill and Jim are a two reeking douchebags. If Jack had any sense he'd have not only cut ties with them but fired them. How would any business allow that? As for Jack, I can't stand people like him who have to be "friends" with everyone no matter what. When you do that, their poor behavior is rewarded and they don't change.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to A New Beginning: Bree's Story or
More submissions by DG Hear.