Fizz,
Glad you see you are still writing - this one is as hot as ever. Well done,
Welshie
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Anonymous04/05/06
Yayyyyyyyyy
Once again it's the little details that make this story so vivid. A believable natural story and a turn-on from beginning to end. Plez
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Anonymous04/05/06
arousE d!!!!
Oh Fizz!!! You've done it again. Another beautiful story that is such a turn on. Well done!
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Anonymous04/05/06
*sigh*
Once again, you've managed to convey heat and warmth at the same time. Lovely. xxx, Redwitch
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Anonymous04/05/06
I'm one of those people
loved the story Fizz, you capture the love and passion so beautifully and so erotic.wow
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Anonymous04/05/06
U been peeping?? Give me back those tapes!!!
Huggles Fizz...CONGRATS!! Yet again you have captured the love and passion of romance!! I really do hope all lovers' Love Dreams turn out like this....including mine ;-)
It brings a smile and warm quiver of memories of when she was still with me on this earth. Then the dark sadness comes back, but thank you for the light of memories.
Please keep writing
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LoveDreams
This story is dedicated to all those in Literotica who have found love...you know who you are!
Great stuff, Fizz
Fizz,
Glad you see you are still writing - this one is as hot as ever. Well done,
Welshie
Yayyyyyyyyy
Once again it's the little details that make this story so vivid. A believable natural story and a turn-on from beginning to end. Plez
arousE d!!!!
Oh Fizz!!! You've done it again. Another beautiful story that is such a turn on. Well done!
*sigh*
Once again, you've managed to convey heat and warmth at the same time. Lovely. xxx, Redwitch
I'm one of those people
loved the story Fizz, you capture the love and passion so beautifully and so erotic.wow
U been peeping?? Give me back those tapes!!!
Huggles Fizz...CONGRATS!! Yet again you have captured the love and passion of romance!! I really do hope all lovers' Love Dreams turn out like this....including mine ;-)
Bring out vivid memories
It brings a smile and warm quiver of memories of when she was still with me on this earth. Then the dark sadness comes back, but thank you for the light of memories.
Please keep writing
warm and fuzzy
Lovely story... just goes to show that romance isn't dead. keep up the great work.
Loved IT
Fizz...Very Nice
Effervescent
A wonderful and sensual story. Your descriptions are reveal a great sensitivity to the pleasures of lovemaking.
Very nice
Lovely description of warm sleepy sex that turns very hot. Thank you so much!
Dreamy
Fizz, you have written another wonderful piece that leaves one wistful and longing for the touch of a lover.
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