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Beautiful
As I said, I have no clue about poem writing, so I'm not even going to try and pick this one apart in any way. I like it better whole anyway :)
It did speak to me in a most enjoyable manner, so thank you very much. I'll be going to read your other poems now.
sweet poem
your passion was pen well and painted a very poetic image. Passing the time (~_~)
mentioned
this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"
really nice poem
"And plan new ones, stacking carefree and careless with careful and wise." Great line!
Lovely
Warm, sensual imagery. I'm glad I discovered your poetry.
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