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Awesome
Loved it. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Impressive
Both Very erotic and thought provoking. It really left me wanting to read more and find out what going on. However, I found the hero's lack of control a little disturbing. Thanks.
Attention Please!
Okey!
You have my attention (looking down)! Now I'd like to see where you're going to take this.
Wanting More
I really enjoyed the story even though it was too short. I'm curious about the doctor's last words," Clean him up, measure him and take him to the holding room"; is Jim to be sold as a slave? Makes me want to know what will happen next.
GREAT!
I LOVED YOUR STORY, PLEASE GIVE US MORE CHAPTER AND MAKE IT LONGER!!! YOU'RE DA MAN!
CMON!!!!!!!!11
need to know what happens
Finish it . . . . . .
Great start, now finish it !!!
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