By all means, please continue. This is hot,hot,hot!!!!!
by
Anonymous04/09/06
what, i've been eating a brotha's cum?
yes, this is the third cream pie you've been sucking, incredibly, isn't it?
gosh, Amy, you love me so much, you bring home nothing but the tastiest of cream pies!
folks, do you want me to tell you more of how addicted I am to sucking my loving wife after she's freshly fucked by brothas with 12 inch dicks? tell me and I'll continue!, he turns to the audience!!!
LOL! gosh, it's so fuckin'ly erotic, reading a man slupringly sucking his wife after she's been fucked hard and spermed by big brothers! stupid little cock-sucking nitwit of sissy!,,, get back to your slurping, little dickhead,,, it's mind bogglingly erotic, yes! lol
by
Anonymous04/09/06
In a word.....not no but HELL NO!
Its all in the comment title.
by
Anonymous04/09/06
you said it a whip puppy
it make you sound like wannabe man.
by
Anonymous04/09/06
Not Another One!
God,just what is needed,another Nigger fucks a white slut wife/mother of two,while a wimp hubby holds up the guys balls story.Cant you ass holes who write this kind of crap see by the scores you get,that most readers dont like it? And thoes that do think its good,are perverts.And now you ask if we want more? HA! Shurly you joke.
continuing this piece of literary garbage. This isn't even good stroke material. Just another wimp pussy whipped white cum eating fem dom bullshit story. Post it on www.darkwanderer.net. That is where you will find several more thousand of the same genre and of the same length.
by
Anonymous04/09/06
So damn predictable. White whore and a wimpy
husband who eats a black man's baby making seed in his slut wife's pussy and seesm to be enjoying it. I know of no MAN who would do that. So you asked and my reply is, "PLease just let it end here. Please! PLEASE P L E A S E !!!!"
This story is such BS a husband who can't seem to tase the cum his wife sucked out of how many men that night 4 or 5? But he seems to be just like the other husbands that has what seems to be a normal life turning into a wimp black cum eating sissy. If in real life the husband throws her whore cocksucking white ass out in the street that night when he finds out what she has been doing then I would say contninue. But your story line is old and fucked up.
by
Anonymous04/09/06
BORING
YAWN....
by
Anonymous04/09/06
PLEASE continue!
so far so good, be more descriptive and lots of dialogue too!
Simply because there is nothing new here. Taking it as given that this is just fiction as you say (man, I sure hope it is because any "man" who puts up with this stuff is really a sorry excuse for a human being, you know) let's look simply at the story components:
No build up. Wife sees porno, wife checks browser history (use a washing program to erase your history, bozo!) makes the arbitray decision she is going to cuchold husband not once, not twice, but thrice! Gives him the obligatory cream pie. And get this. Eating another mans cum out of her freshly fucked pussy doesn't bother him, but that man being black does! I would have puked right in her cunt.
No character development. Why did the woman decide to do this? Really weak. Any history of marital discord? In ability to perform? In short, why is this silly bitch jeaporadizing her marriage all of a sudden?
Alstly, can't you assholes behave your selves at least until the kids are grown?! Kids learn from the parents. I really hate when these stories happen to people with kids. You didn't need to bring that in. If this were real and not fiction,in another 20 years when the kids are in therapy after 2 failed marriages and can't seem to connect with others on the planet, these fictional parents don't need to sit around with their thumbs up their asses wondering why. We KNOW why!
In summary for future use:
Build a bit of charater development. Make us care about some character.
Put a little history or foundation to what is happening.
Make the reasons believable, not just people lead around by their genitalia!
Drop the kid angle.
Regards,
C
by
Anonymous04/09/06
Another sick story
Where do they find all the authors who write this sick garbage. Once in a while, you find an anon who seems to enjoy it, but the huge majority of readers are so disgusted with the stories that they quit reading halfway through the story before they get nauseous. What a poor excuse for an erotic story. 60 year old George
by
Anonymous04/09/06
want it continued?
i'm presuming that tag line
was the author's idea of a joke
of sorts ....as was his 'story'
MEOP; Some do and some dont. As for me YES do continue. I like you story very much. The suprise you put into with the creampie was good. Hurry up. okdeacon
by
Anonymous04/10/06
Taa Dumb - By Unanamous Vote (13 to 2) NO
If you want to froth up your freakie sick mind and fingers why just go ahead, but don't post it, as by the votes you requested it was almost unanimous - so far as the NO's have it 13 to 2!!! Not even close little sick one!!
Why do you suppose such a demonstratively negative vote writer??? Could it be the poor writing ability - well yes and no! Could it be the absurd pathetic braindead wimp eating snot cum from his suddenly rotted wife and mommy hole - of course little sick dummy.
Most readers here are semi-normal folks and preponderously male as opposed to the few wussies who need helpless male humiliation pushed in their face by the mother of someones children. Hi to writers mommy by the way (not funnie or arousing is it).
So, exciting to a few jaded sicko's and writers but sadly raising the wrong emotion to the other 99% which is ANGER at the asshole husband, whore slut mommie wife and the person who created them into the subhuman creatins depicted so sickily.
So - NO writer - go away - don't post but do exhaust yourself in the solitute of your warped freakie mind. That way only your family, neighbors, relatives and workmates are exposed to your disgusting frailities. You know, the people who used to care - who you now are or will be foriegn to. Get help little sick one.
Peculiar isn't it readers. Like most panderers of worthless depressing freakish absurdities, some amount of talent but haven't grasped that 99% are different in & to thier minds viewpoint and never will understand it in most cases. Sad!
by
Anonymous04/10/06
Don't bother.
derivative and poorly written.
by
Anonymous04/10/06
NO -unless
Don't bother -- unless you can suddenly figure out how have the husband grow a set of balls and remove a set from anyone who ventures into his territory - and do it in a believable fashion. Big order considering the start you have.
by
Anonymous04/10/06
Hell yes!!
Great story. Please continue. Your writing is fantastic. In all literature, as well as movies and other media, the 'same' story is re-told with variations. George Lucas' Star Wars has many similarities to Fritz Lang's Metropolis. Which sold more tickets? The detractors are engaging in the same old semantics. If only in fantasy, there are many dreamcucks that will experience this throbber from someone elses vision put to text. Remember that homosexuals are so universally hated by the righteous because they have 'sex for pleasure' not procreation.
The writer of this piece of shit is a very sick motherfucker and a useless queer asshole. May you rot in hell and I hope I never make the gross mistake of starting to read another of your perverted postings.
by
Anonymous04/10/06
By All Means, Yes
A fantasy is a fantasy. One man's rubbish is another man's treasure. Please continue writing. You are a good writer along with having a vivid imagination. Thanks for sharing.
the wife should know there is a lot of difference between fanasy and reality. If the husband dose not want a slut for a wife and deals with her by making her understand or divorce this could be a good story. But you are moving it to black guy big dick white hubby cuckold. Not cool
the wife should know there is a lot of difference between fanasy and reality. If the husband dose not want a slut for a wife and deals with her by making her understand or divorce this could be a good story. But you are moving it to black guy big dick white hubby cuckold. Not cool
by
Anonymous04/10/06
wow
that was just great love to hear more.
by
Anonymous04/10/06
Great More Please
Please continue. Thanks Very Hot Story
by
Anonymous04/11/06
keep it up
keep it up and how about getting her to come off the pill for her black lover.
A true slut doesn't care about birth control
by
Anonymous07/16/06
he can't eat it let me
soooooon
by
Anonymous09/05/08
Not likely
The story is great, but the husband eating another man's cum (black or white) I don't believe. My wife regularly fucks black cock and sometimes I will fuck her straight after he has shot his cum into her. I like the sloppyness, but eat it - no way.
by
Anonymous07/30/09
THERE IS A DIFFERENCE BETWEEN FANTASY AND REALITY
MAKE SURE TO GET PHOTOS AND/OR WITNESSES SO YOU CAN DIVORCE HER.
by
Anonymous06/09/11
he made her a future slut
she is hot and it seems she is going to be a marvelous whore
by
Anonymous06/27/12
LOVE white SLUT wifes getting black fucked
Yes continue ... I use to share my wife with hung black guys and it was AWESOME ! Too bad this is fiction, I'ed love talking to you about it !
English
Continued?
Please finish your stories before posting them.
Yes!
By all means, please continue. This is hot,hot,hot!!!!!
what, i've been eating a brotha's cum?
yes, this is the third cream pie you've been sucking, incredibly, isn't it?
gosh, Amy, you love me so much, you bring home nothing but the tastiest of cream pies!
folks, do you want me to tell you more of how addicted I am to sucking my loving wife after she's freshly fucked by brothas with 12 inch dicks? tell me and I'll continue!, he turns to the audience!!!
LOL! gosh, it's so fuckin'ly erotic, reading a man slupringly sucking his wife after she's been fucked hard and spermed by big brothers! stupid little cock-sucking nitwit of sissy!,,, get back to your slurping, little dickhead,,, it's mind bogglingly erotic, yes! lol
In a word.....not no but HELL NO!
Its all in the comment title.
you said it a whip puppy
it make you sound like wannabe man.
Not Another One!
God,just what is needed,another Nigger fucks a white slut wife/mother of two,while a wimp hubby holds up the guys balls story.Cant you ass holes who write this kind of crap see by the scores you get,that most readers dont like it? And thoes that do think its good,are perverts.And now you ask if we want more? HA! Shurly you joke.
Don't Bother
continuing this piece of literary garbage. This isn't even good stroke material. Just another wimp pussy whipped white cum eating fem dom bullshit story. Post it on www.darkwanderer.net. That is where you will find several more thousand of the same genre and of the same length.
So damn predictable. White whore and a wimpy
husband who eats a black man's baby making seed in his slut wife's pussy and seesm to be enjoying it. I know of no MAN who would do that. So you asked and my reply is, "PLease just let it end here. Please! PLEASE P L E A S E !!!!"
This story is such BS a husband who can't seem to tase the cum his wife sucked out of how many men that night 4 or 5? But he seems to be just like the other husbands that has what seems to be a normal life turning into a wimp black cum eating sissy. If in real life the husband throws her whore cocksucking white ass out in the street that night when he finds out what she has been doing then I would say contninue. But your story line is old and fucked up.
BORING
YAWN....
PLEASE continue!
so far so good, be more descriptive and lots of dialogue too!
No
Please stop there.
ahh, no!
Simply because there is nothing new here. Taking it as given that this is just fiction as you say (man, I sure hope it is because any "man" who puts up with this stuff is really a sorry excuse for a human being, you know) let's look simply at the story components:
No build up. Wife sees porno, wife checks browser history (use a washing program to erase your history, bozo!) makes the arbitray decision she is going to cuchold husband not once, not twice, but thrice! Gives him the obligatory cream pie. And get this. Eating another mans cum out of her freshly fucked pussy doesn't bother him, but that man being black does! I would have puked right in her cunt.
No character development. Why did the woman decide to do this? Really weak. Any history of marital discord? In ability to perform? In short, why is this silly bitch jeaporadizing her marriage all of a sudden?
Alstly, can't you assholes behave your selves at least until the kids are grown?! Kids learn from the parents. I really hate when these stories happen to people with kids. You didn't need to bring that in. If this were real and not fiction,in another 20 years when the kids are in therapy after 2 failed marriages and can't seem to connect with others on the planet, these fictional parents don't need to sit around with their thumbs up their asses wondering why. We KNOW why!
In summary for future use:
Build a bit of charater development. Make us care about some character.
Put a little history or foundation to what is happening.
Make the reasons believable, not just people lead around by their genitalia!
Drop the kid angle.
Regards,
C
Another sick story
Where do they find all the authors who write this sick garbage. Once in a while, you find an anon who seems to enjoy it, but the huge majority of readers are so disgusted with the stories that they quit reading halfway through the story before they get nauseous. What a poor excuse for an erotic story. 60 year old George
want it continued?
i'm presuming that tag line
was the author's idea of a joke
of sorts ....as was his 'story'
Yes
MEOP; Some do and some dont. As for me YES do continue. I like you story very much. The suprise you put into with the creampie was good. Hurry up. okdeacon
Taa Dumb - By Unanamous Vote (13 to 2) NO
If you want to froth up your freakie sick mind and fingers why just go ahead, but don't post it, as by the votes you requested it was almost unanimous - so far as the NO's have it 13 to 2!!! Not even close little sick one!!
Why do you suppose such a demonstratively negative vote writer??? Could it be the poor writing ability - well yes and no! Could it be the absurd pathetic braindead wimp eating snot cum from his suddenly rotted wife and mommy hole - of course little sick dummy.
Most readers here are semi-normal folks and preponderously male as opposed to the few wussies who need helpless male humiliation pushed in their face by the mother of someones children. Hi to writers mommy by the way (not funnie or arousing is it).
So, exciting to a few jaded sicko's and writers but sadly raising the wrong emotion to the other 99% which is ANGER at the asshole husband, whore slut mommie wife and the person who created them into the subhuman creatins depicted so sickily.
So - NO writer - go away - don't post but do exhaust yourself in the solitute of your warped freakie mind. That way only your family, neighbors, relatives and workmates are exposed to your disgusting frailities. You know, the people who used to care - who you now are or will be foriegn to. Get help little sick one.
Peculiar isn't it readers. Like most panderers of worthless depressing freakish absurdities, some amount of talent but haven't grasped that 99% are different in & to thier minds viewpoint and never will understand it in most cases. Sad!
Don't bother.
derivative and poorly written.
NO -unless
Don't bother -- unless you can suddenly figure out how have the husband grow a set of balls and remove a set from anyone who ventures into his territory - and do it in a believable fashion. Big order considering the start you have.
Hell yes!!
Great story. Please continue. Your writing is fantastic. In all literature, as well as movies and other media, the 'same' story is re-told with variations. George Lucas' Star Wars has many similarities to Fritz Lang's Metropolis. Which sold more tickets? The detractors are engaging in the same old semantics. If only in fantasy, there are many dreamcucks that will experience this throbber from someone elses vision put to text. Remember that homosexuals are so universally hated by the righteous because they have 'sex for pleasure' not procreation.
Bullshit
The writer of this piece of shit is a very sick motherfucker and a useless queer asshole. May you rot in hell and I hope I never make the gross mistake of starting to read another of your perverted postings.
By All Means, Yes
A fantasy is a fantasy. One man's rubbish is another man's treasure. Please continue writing. You are a good writer along with having a vivid imagination. Thanks for sharing.
could be good
the wife should know there is a lot of difference between fanasy and reality. If the husband dose not want a slut for a wife and deals with her by making her understand or divorce this could be a good story. But you are moving it to black guy big dick white hubby cuckold. Not cool
could be good
the wife should know there is a lot of difference between fanasy and reality. If the husband dose not want a slut for a wife and deals with her by making her understand or divorce this could be a good story. But you are moving it to black guy big dick white hubby cuckold. Not cool
wow
that was just great love to hear more.
Great More Please
Please continue. Thanks Very Hot Story
keep it up
keep it up and how about getting her to come off the pill for her black lover.
A true slut doesn't care about birth control
he can't eat it let me
soooooon
Not likely
The story is great, but the husband eating another man's cum (black or white) I don't believe. My wife regularly fucks black cock and sometimes I will fuck her straight after he has shot his cum into her. I like the sloppyness, but eat it - no way.
THERE IS A DIFFERENCE BETWEEN FANTASY AND REALITY
MAKE SURE TO GET PHOTOS AND/OR WITNESSES SO YOU CAN DIVORCE HER.
he made her a future slut
she is hot and it seems she is going to be a marvelous whore
LOVE white SLUT wifes getting black fucked
Yes continue ... I use to share my wife with hung black guys and it was AWESOME ! Too bad this is fiction, I'ed love talking to you about it !
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