...to meet and have the opportunity to cherish a woman as remarkable and beautiful as Mia, and to feel so loved by her, too. Wow!
You write beautifully about the pain we can inflict on ourselves, consciously and unconsciously. You also write sweetly, and with a huge amount of understanding about the human condition, and the power of love and forgiveness of self. And, the fullness of your characters--they are so real.
I could write lots more in gratitude, but I'll end now with a great big THANK YOU!
...to meet and have the opportunity to cherish a woman as remarkable and beautiful as Mia, and to feel so loved by her, too. Wow!
You write beautifully about the pain we can inflict on ourselves, consciously and unconsciously. You also write sweetly, and with a huge amount of understanding about the human condition, and the power of love and forgiveness of self. And, the fullness of your characters--they are so real.
I could write lots more in gratitude, but I'll end now with a great big THANK YOU!
Please continue to write.
by
Anonymous04/10/06
Full of Hope
The kindness between the characters is beautiful. I hope it is also real because it's a story of hope.
Congratulations Scorpio44-- a great story that started out very low and improved dramatically as it evolved. One of the few original, loving stories I've read- the characterizations were wonderfully done, the hesitation, the mutual lack of cofidence in their sexual capabilities, the mutual concern for each others comfort level.wonderful sensitive story about two lonely people.---wonderful writing. Thanks! 60 year old George
by
Anonymous04/10/06
IT IS WHAT IT IS & That is Very Good Author
What a great picture you painted. Impressive Author.
You are very much appreciated for touching dormant emotions and bringing them into the sunlight that everyone can feel if they choose.
Scorpio you light the way for loyal readers with yet another fine tale of rekindled love and hope. Your characters appear so live and real and the plot, although sombre for the most part is truly heart warming. You honour us with yet another glimpse of you brilliance!
On a scale of 1 to 5, I'd definately call this a 10! Wonderfully written romance that was a joy toread. The only criticism I had was that your numbers don't add up--or the information about when Mia became his secretary isn't clear enough. Still, though the math may not have been yuour thing, writing certainly id. Beautifully written. I enjoyed the slow attraction that grew between the to of them.
...this story really hits home. Blowing out the cobwebs, that's what Mia said. I enjoyed sex when I was young. Now? Now I cherish it...Nice one Scorpio.
Scorpio I really enjoyed this story it had feelings and i felt for him when his wife killed herself.
I would love to read more of Mia.
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Anonymous04/26/09
Happiness is the base of this story..
Live your life..
Enjoy it..
And finally.. Learn to enjoy working out your life's problems.
Love you all..
by
Anonymous12/13/09
Nice little story
to think they waited fifteen years before coming out of the gloom - almost a lifetime but now they have each other to share life's path with - sweet and tender and so good. Must try that peanut butter and honey sandwich idea - sounds scrummy.
Keep writing stories just like this. Love 'em.
I know they're just stories, but...
I turn 60 soon and hope is a good thing to have.
These stories help. Keep 'em coming.
DBH
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Anonymous09/15/11
One favor
Your profile says you are now writing as Scorpio44A (I think). This site's search function for authors by name is pathetic. Please oh please post something that links from Scorpio44 to 44A.
And may I say supremely realistic and romantic. I love a well-written story! And I love mature lovers! Absolutely wonderful story! Thank you for taking me on this little journey!
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Anonymous12/18/13
nice story of two lonely people finding love again
it can happen and does happen...just need to find the right person...a nice little tale of unfolding love...nice one
I thought romance had been a feeling that I would not have again, great story and also gives one a ray of hope. I enjoyed the character development and how you put the feelings into the story.
English
I enjoyed this
A lovely sweet story.
Thank you
janiexx
I should be so lucky...
...to meet and have the opportunity to cherish a woman as remarkable and beautiful as Mia, and to feel so loved by her, too. Wow!
You write beautifully about the pain we can inflict on ourselves, consciously and unconsciously. You also write sweetly, and with a huge amount of understanding about the human condition, and the power of love and forgiveness of self. And, the fullness of your characters--they are so real.
I could write lots more in gratitude, but I'll end now with a great big THANK YOU!
Please continue to write.
I should be so lucky...
...to meet and have the opportunity to cherish a woman as remarkable and beautiful as Mia, and to feel so loved by her, too. Wow!
You write beautifully about the pain we can inflict on ourselves, consciously and unconsciously. You also write sweetly, and with a huge amount of understanding about the human condition, and the power of love and forgiveness of self. And, the fullness of your characters--they are so real.
I could write lots more in gratitude, but I'll end now with a great big THANK YOU!
Please continue to write.
Full of Hope
The kindness between the characters is beautiful. I hope it is also real because it's a story of hope.
Just beautiful!
Scorpio, what a beautiful story.
It really moved me. Excellent writing.
Great story
Congratulations Scorpio44-- a great story that started out very low and improved dramatically as it evolved. One of the few original, loving stories I've read- the characterizations were wonderfully done, the hesitation, the mutual lack of cofidence in their sexual capabilities, the mutual concern for each others comfort level.wonderful sensitive story about two lonely people.---wonderful writing. Thanks! 60 year old George
IT IS WHAT IT IS & That is Very Good Author
What a great picture you painted. Impressive Author.
You are very much appreciated for touching dormant emotions and bringing them into the sunlight that everyone can feel if they choose.
More Please!
Thanks Author - With Very High Regard
As a Horny 'ol Sailor I want my turn
Scorpio:
What a fine tale for us old fogy's. Maybe the next and best time is around the corner. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Born Again
Oh to a new life!
Quite enjoyable for the fire in the furnace to be reignited after the devastation.
Please write more stories along this line.
Scorpio thank you!!!
Scorpio you light the way for loyal readers with yet another fine tale of rekindled love and hope. Your characters appear so live and real and the plot, although sombre for the most part is truly heart warming. You honour us with yet another glimpse of you brilliance!
Great!
On a scale of 1 to 5, I'd definately call this a 10! Wonderfully written romance that was a joy toread. The only criticism I had was that your numbers don't add up--or the information about when Mia became his secretary isn't clear enough. Still, though the math may not have been yuour thing, writing certainly id. Beautifully written. I enjoyed the slow attraction that grew between the to of them.
Thanks!
Cobbler
as an old guy...
...this story really hits home. Blowing out the cobwebs, that's what Mia said. I enjoyed sex when I was young. Now? Now I cherish it...Nice one Scorpio.
A Really Great Story
Scorpio I really enjoyed this story it had feelings and i felt for him when his wife killed herself.
I would love to read more of Mia.
Happiness is the base of this story..
Live your life..
Enjoy it..
And finally.. Learn to enjoy working out your life's problems.
Love you all..
Nice little story
to think they waited fifteen years before coming out of the gloom - almost a lifetime but now they have each other to share life's path with - sweet and tender and so good. Must try that peanut butter and honey sandwich idea - sounds scrummy.
Nice!
Keep writing stories just like this. Love 'em.
I know they're just stories, but...
I turn 60 soon and hope is a good thing to have.
These stories help. Keep 'em coming.
DBH
One favor
Your profile says you are now writing as Scorpio44A (I think). This site's search function for authors by name is pathetic. Please oh please post something that links from Scorpio44 to 44A.
Nice and sweet. A very beautiful story.
Thank you for a well written tale that was certainly more than worth the Five Stars I gave it.
NO MATTER HOW OLD-----WHAT TRAGEDY OCCURED
sex still rules the libido. TK U MLJ LV NV
FWIW
It took me less than 5 minutes to find Scorpio44a.
As always, terrific writing. Terrific story.
Delightfully delicious!
And may I say supremely realistic and romantic. I love a well-written story! And I love mature lovers! Absolutely wonderful story! Thank you for taking me on this little journey!
nice story of two lonely people finding love again
it can happen and does happen...just need to find the right person...a nice little tale of unfolding love...nice one
Turning 60
I thought romance had been a feeling that I would not have again, great story and also gives one a ray of hope. I enjoyed the character development and how you put the feelings into the story.
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