by Just Plain Bob
this is really good... u should really continue it with a few more chapters
BOB, MOST OF YOUR OTHER STORIES ARE LONGER , THIS ONE COULD MAYBE USE ANOTHER CHAPTER. DETAILS WOULD BE NICE. ..LAROC OF AGES
what a scum of the earth slut. I hope her hubby finds out and puts her on the curb penny less...
I hate cheaters. I hope hubby comes home early one day and blows both their brains out!
Fucking Shit Story!
Maybe no one on Lit can match Just Plain Bob for variety. From stores that allow no wiggle room for a cheater to others that glorify the cheater. From stories that are not finished and leave you hanging (too many) to others that tie it all up (too few). Rather simple flash stories to stories with complicated, hugely imaginative plots. Stories with too much revenge on the cheater to stories with none. Well, you get it.
What's the same? Well written. Every time.
So, did JPB surprise you with this one?
Paul in Oklahoma
Now THAT's what I call a sister (and a cheating wife, of course). If you commit incest and adultery simultaneously, do the two sins cancel each other out? Five stars.
This was sooo sick! Then why did I like it enough to give it 5*? One of life's little mysteries.