All Comments on 'The Unexpected'

by Just Plain Bob

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Roadrunner47Roadrunner47about 18 years ago
Up There Bob

Well Bob, Just getting up there all the time

stevaroonistevarooniabout 18 years ago
Great intro!

Awesome description. I like the disjointed timeframe.

prop69prop69almost 18 years ago
Damn fine story

Great story line! My dick is throbbing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
chapter 2 please

this is really good... u should really continue it with a few more chapters

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
IT'S A GOOD STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BOB, MOST OF YOUR OTHER STORIES ARE LONGER , THIS ONE COULD MAYBE USE ANOTHER CHAPTER. DETAILS WOULD BE NICE. ..LAROC OF AGES

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
???

what a scum of the earth slut. I hope her hubby finds out and puts her on the curb penny less...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This was shit!

I hate cheaters. I hope hubby comes home early one day and blows both their brains out!

Fucking Shit Story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
VARIETY

Maybe no one on Lit can match Just Plain Bob for variety. From stores that allow no wiggle room for a cheater to others that glorify the cheater. From stories that are not finished and leave you hanging (too many) to others that tie it all up (too few). Rather simple flash stories to stories with complicated, hugely imaginative plots. Stories with too much revenge on the cheater to stories with none. Well, you get it.

What's the same? Well written. Every time.

So, did JPB surprise you with this one?

Paul in Oklahoma

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 2 years ago

Now THAT's what I call a sister (and a cheating wife, of course). If you commit incest and adultery simultaneously, do the two sins cancel each other out? Five stars.

imhaplessimhaplessover 2 years ago

This was sooo sick! Then why did I like it enough to give it 5*? One of life's little mysteries.

DuncanitaDuncanita12 months ago

Holy shit, even i would like being her little fucktoy😅😅

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...