All Comments on 'Fara, Sharifah and Emilia together'

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bmw1080bmw1080almost 18 years ago
Getting better

Famela

Your writing is improving each chapter. Much more description and scene setting. You could add in more expressive words and the feelings of each of the girls.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
good story

love is about feeling and harmony.. it's ok if girl want to be lesbian.... -Az, negeri 9, Malaysia

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