All Comments on '...I dream of Elvis'

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 18 years ago
Chuckle

Thanks for the smiles and the giggles this afternoon. ~ Red

AngelineAngelineabout 18 years ago
Ah Liar, you write the best poetry

even if this is a sicko little poem, lol. the images are wonderful ("velvet hips" is perfect!) and the query is not quite tongue-in-cheek. it has--to me--great thematic balance. :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
the king?

well, the queen doesn't do it for me neither <grin perhaps the princess? any way you slice it, I think your one crazy cool cat with a pen <grin

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
very funny indeed......

nice one liar........don

WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
Ohhhh!

I love it! Dreaming of fat Elvis! You're such a cool poet. :)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

and then there's the poetic Elvis...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Little Memphis boy!

And to think it all started with Elvis just wanting to make a record for his Mommie. Grotesque distortions made even more comical by this Poet's cleverness. Amusing!

MetamorphoseMetamorphoseover 13 years ago
Like it

Not into poetry much, but loved it.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
DANK YA VER MUSH

he has left the buildings. TK U MLJ LV NV

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