All Comments on 'Method To The Madness'

by Liar

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Maria2394Maria2394about 18 years ago
lovely

LIar, I have always admired your skill with capturing the visual and creating it a place in the emotional part of your work. This is just beautiful.

One suggestion, The last line

One enigma at a time, seems like its in the wrong place, or unneeded, but it is needed, how about this-

One enigma at a time,

I'll leave that one

for another day.

also, I think maybe "plant" needs an S?

:)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
method to the madness

and that would be? ...interesting poetry (~_~)

WickedEveWickedEveabout 18 years ago
superb

Wonderful poem. Nearly flawless--"and plant(s) white lilies"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
This is so good

I like your imagery in your poem,esp the first stanza

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Vivid imaery here ~

*** I love it Liar. ***

You paint a beautiful picture of yesterdays tomorrow's and leave us with a smile that last a lifetime. Sentimental lil journey here and how I do love'm!! Love your dreamy images.

Please give us more !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I have read this

several times ...and each time I find something different and interesting...takes many avenues for me..I enjoy re reading this ty..blue

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